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The Thing Revisited
by
JudgeWall
Previous Room
Riles walked out to the remainders of the outbuildings. Nothing remained but twisted metal scraps and broken wood.
Interestingly, a large hole near the center of the remains of the second building gaped up like a sickly pore. The floor of the hole was about four feet below Riles' feet, and Riles could see that a tunnel drifted forward and to the right from the bottom of the hole.
Riles wondered whether he would be getting himself into trouble by dropping into the hole alone to investigate, or whether it was even worth doing it at all.
Should Riles:
Choice
Go and find Walker and Davison?
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
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No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
No Room Link
a look around - ID: 24194
buried - ID: 25740
closer look - ID: 24212
crevice - ID: 25571
darkening tunnel - ID: 30112
found the dog - ID: 24062
ice doom - ID: 23985
on their way - ID: 25547
polar star - ID: 23689
rescue 2 - ID: 26493
rescued - ID: 26492
reunion - ID: 30116
scientist or samples - ID: 24883
searching - ID: 26605
snow - ID: 25570
tape recorder - ID: 30108
the bay - ID: 25557
the dog - ID: 23329
the hole - ID: 30110
turning back - ID: 30113
water tomb - ID: 30114
whiteout - ID: 25734
ID: 30115
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