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The Third Eye
by
donteatpoop
Previous Room
You calmly set down the breifcase and step away. You don't mess around with people carrying guns, just as a rule of thumb. It's a rule that you stand firmly by.
"Now get the hell out of here." He tells you. You glance back at him as you start to walk away and catch a glint of his eye. You are instantly flooded with thoughts and memories, most of them unpleasant.
This man works for Fat Tony, the guy whom this briefcase belongs to. He's worked for Fat Tony for years, but he doesn't get the impression Tony likes him very much. He always gets the crap jobs. "Follow this guy around, make sure he gets me my money." was his latest mission. He hates Fat Tony, but with all the time he's done in the joint, this is about the best gig in town. His own mother hates him. She used to beat him with broom sticks when he got out of line. Perhaps that's the root of his problems... Perhaps it's because he doesn't know who his father is. There could be a hundred different reasons, you figure, but it all boils down to one thing. This guy is a worthless bum. But, he wouldn't hesitate to kill you. His name is Ken.
You're pretty sure you can talk him into giving you the money back, but do you realy want to take that chance with the gun in his hand?
Choice
Get out of there while you still can. There are plenty of others to take advantage of.
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rich bitch - ID: 28874
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the chick - ID: 28865
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rich bitch - ID: 28874
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rich bitch - ID: 28874
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the chick - ID: 28865
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rich bitch - ID: 28874
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start the day - ID: 28832
success - ID: 28870
the beginning - ID: 28830
the businessman - ID: 28834
the chick - ID: 28865
the proffessor - ID: 28869
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you set it down - ID: 28866
ID: 131166
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ID: 29252
ID: 28904
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rich bitch - ID: 28874
social with tony - ID: 43053
start the day - ID: 28832
success - ID: 28870
the beginning - ID: 28830
the businessman - ID: 28834
the chick - ID: 28865
the proffessor - ID: 28869
what to do - ID: 28906
you set it down - ID: 28866
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