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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Criminals
by
Shabti
Previous Room
Drive away from the crime scene and stop the car. Having a certain knowledge about cars, you smash the annoying transponder. You get back into the car, checking your gun for bullets.
Choice
Ram raid the police station
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
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Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
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No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
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ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
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ID: 26328
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No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
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ID: 92157
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ID: 12102
ID: 26327
ID: 26328
ID: 26329
ID: 26330
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ID: 57549
ID: 59936
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
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No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
ID: 94285
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ID: 108818
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ID: 121961
ID: 134266
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ID: 134273
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ID: 188087
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ID: 16177
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ID: 21347
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No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
ID: 94285
ID: 102623
ID: 108818
ID: 114073
ID: 121961
ID: 134266
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ID: 134270
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ID: 188087
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ID: 12748
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ID: 21347
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ID: 10851
ID: 24092
ID: 24301
ID: 25553
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ID: 25613
ID: 25614
ID: 12102
ID: 26327
ID: 26328
ID: 26329
ID: 26330
ID: 12101
ID: 33390
ID: 57549
ID: 59936
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
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ID: 21348
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ID: 57549
ID: 59936
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
ID: 94285
ID: 102623
ID: 108818
ID: 114073
ID: 121961
ID: 134266
ID: 60011
ID: 134268
ID: 134270
ID: 134271
ID: 134272
ID: 134273
ID: 134274
ID: 164211
ID: 188087
ID: 208261
ID: 11250
ID: 12489
ID: 11248
ID: 16184
ID: 16177
ID: 20715
ID: 12748
ID: 21346
ID: 21347
ID: 21348
ID: 22668
ID: 10851
ID: 24092
ID: 24301
ID: 25553
ID: 11249
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ID: 25614
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ID: 26327
ID: 26328
ID: 26329
ID: 26330
ID: 12101
ID: 33390
ID: 57549
ID: 59936
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
ID: 94285
ID: 102623
ID: 108818
ID: 114073
ID: 121961
ID: 134266
ID: 60011
ID: 134268
ID: 134270
ID: 134271
ID: 134272
ID: 134273
ID: 134274
ID: 164211
ID: 188087
ID: 208261
ID: 11250
ID: 12489
ID: 11248
ID: 16184
ID: 16177
ID: 20715
ID: 12748
ID: 21346
ID: 21347
ID: 21348
ID: 22668
ID: 10851
ID: 24092
ID: 24301
ID: 25553
ID: 11249
ID: 25612
ID: 25613
ID: 25614
ID: 12102
ID: 26327
ID: 26328
ID: 26329
ID: 26330
ID: 12101
ID: 33390
ID: 57549
ID: 59936
No Room Link
attack1 - ID: 9728
attack2 - ID: 9730
beaks bills - ID: 16698
begin - ID: 9727
bensroom - ID: 22982
break in - ID: 25559
c000 - ID: 8953
denied - ID: 16731
door or fence - ID: 16982
electric chair - ID: 90846
fence climb - ID: 32521
Hiding time - ID: 208984
meatball - ID: 25649
news report - ID: 11948
not so calm - ID: 21082
only dead - ID: 9732
police cars - ID: 18653
reg - ID: 27878
retrieve - ID: 9734
return home - ID: 11082
run1 - ID: 9731
run2 - ID: 9733
Shop - ID: 203950
Taxi and Iza drive - ID: 195372
Turn yourself in end - ID: 198643
ID: 134267
ID: 80673
ID: 11268
ID: 92157
ID: 92519
ID: 92679
ID: 93115
ID: 93237
ID: 94285
ID: 102623
ID: 108818
ID: 114073
ID: 121961
ID: 134266
ID: 60011
ID: 134268
ID: 134270
ID: 134271
ID: 134272
ID: 134273
ID: 134274
ID: 164211
ID: 188087
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ID: 11250
ID: 12489
ID: 11248
ID: 16184
ID: 16177
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ID: 12748
ID: 21346
ID: 21347
ID: 21348
ID: 22668
ID: 10851
ID: 24092
ID: 24301
ID: 25553
ID: 11249
ID: 25612
ID: 25613
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ID: 26328
ID: 26329
ID: 26330
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ID: 33390
ID: 57549
ID: 59936
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