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Diaries of a Serial Killer by NCPolice55571
July 7, 2004 3:39pm[I]
I had just finished my afternoon sandwich when I got a call from the dispatch center of the station. A tip had come in thet O'Mally was last seen at the docks near Pier 27. I immediatly drove down there before anyone else had a chance to respond.

I parked the car at the edge of the dock of the bay. I walked a few blocks over to Pier 27. There had been a large ship unloading wooden crates into a warehouse. I took out the picture of O'Mally and scanned over it quickly once more. Then I seen him.

He pulled into the pier driving a small red convertable car. The bastard probably bought it with drug money. If I was to do anything I had to act fast and be unseen. It was in the middle of the day and the docks and piers were full of people who were working.
Try and get him in the warehouse
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