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Zargos, Planet of Wonders
by
Milo
Previous Room
Ignoring the jet sleds your run down the stairs toward the courtyard. The courtyard is lined with various buildings and is the intersection for a number of larger passageways. From one of them you hear the echo many foot steps.
A detachment of soldiers is heading this way! From where you are standing you can see the gate leading outside the palace. But it is across the courtyard from you.
What will you do?
Choice
Make a break for the gate!
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
No Room Link
arrival - ID: 20919
courtyard - ID: 21046
forest choice - ID: 21051
jetsled end - ID: 21047
mountains choice - ID: 21049
palace air escape - ID: 21038
palace airport - ID: 21036
palace bombardment - ID: 21048
palace hide - ID: 21035
palace liftoff - ID: 21037
palace officers - ID: 21044
palace thrown room - ID: 21040
palace tunnel - ID: 21041
palace yorlon - ID: 21053
pit delay - ID: 20923
pit end - ID: 20921
pit escape - ID: 20924
rock baboons - ID: 20920
sea choice - ID: 21050
space gun - ID: 21045
trogmen one - ID: 21052
which woman - ID: 20922
zerg rush - ID: 98415
zorina mate - ID: 21039
ID: 21074
ID: 135687
ID: 135686
ID: 135685
ID: 135684
ID: 135683
ID: 135682
ID: 135681
ID: 21123
ID: 21122
ID: 21073
ID: 21072
ID: 21071
ID: 21070
ID: 21042
ID: 21043
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