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A HOUSE TO REMEMBER
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kaleb3140
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My dad built a house for my mother and my 4 brothers on 20 acres in the woods in Frederic, Michigan. Even when the house was still not finished, we began experiencing things going on that we could not explain.
For instance: My brother Jesse and I were walking from the cul de sac at the end of our road, when we looked to the side, we saw 2 dark figures moving about in the woods. I freaked out and told Jesse we should run. This happened on a bright sunny afternoon.
When we went back to the house and told my other brother Justin,(who is Jesse's twin)that we saw something strange in the woods and of course my other 2 twin brothers Kyle and Cam (who were 7 at the time), walked in and listened and of course were frightened.
The next day, we forgot all about what we saw the day before, and all of a sudden, Justin said "Look over there".
We looked to where he was pointing, and we saw another dark figure and it was shaped different from the others we saw. It started running in the direction of the cul de sac.
One day my Gramma came to visit and she got there while we were away from home shopping, and knowing the doors weren't locked she went in and waited at the dining room table for us to return. She never felt comfortable in our house as she was always hearing strange noises even when everyone was home, but on this particular day while she was alone, she realized she wasn't really alone. We have 5 bedrooms upstairs and all the floors are wooden, she distinctly heard men's footsteps like they had workboots on and yelled for Joe,(my father) thinking he might have come home and she didn't know he was in the house. Well when he didn't answer she knew she was alone with whoever was making the footsteps(no one,of course, that was visible) Again, this was on a bright, sunny day.
She stayed at the dining room table as it was close to 2 doors if she had to run for it quickly. By the time my mother and the rest of us got home she was white as a sheet and said" That's the last time I stay here alone"
One night my dad was working in the city which meant he wouldn't be home that night and my mother was in bed reading and she heard the chimes start ringing that she had hanging in her bedroom. No windows were open, no one was moving about the house, we were all asleep.
She looked towards the window because she felt someone was looking at her and she saw a face in the window like nothing she had ever seen. She screamed for my brother Justin, to come downstairs quickly and she made him stay downstairs with her, waiting to see if he would return. It didn't...
My mother spent many nights alone in the house in the woods and was not one to frighten easily but she finally talked my father to moving out of that house after many happenings, many sightings and many pictures of orbs we took.
Some people say, that we manifested these things to create more havoc in our already hectic lives, but we know better.
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