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Extend the Story - Add a Room
~*articulate what forever smoulders*~
by
chocolateless
Previous Room
You look down at yourself, giving yourself a quick once-over to see if there are any obvious implants or taped-on technological nodes which would explain your predicament, but you see nothing at all. It's actually quite fitting: you look exactly as you remember, your clothes how you remember them being, down to every torn seam and coffee stain. A few little things, things only you would notice, are different, of course, but other than that there is no obvious piece of machinery on you that explains your predicament.
Then you notice it. While everything else in this shadow reality is subtly different, the thought that it would extend to your personal manifestation never occurred to you until now - but apparently it has. The thousand and one imperfections, little bits of you that you despise but only you would notice, aren't there: the rash at the base of your neck, that irritating bit of dandruff, the oil caught under your fingers, the extra bit of fat on your hips and sunkenness in your eyes. Though the more obvious imperfections are there, and you are the same general size and shape as you should be, you look almost an idealized version of yourself, with all these minor blemishes smoothed away.
A quick look up in your desk mirror sees a single stray eyebrow hair, an irritating bit of folicle that always annoyed you but never merited plucking, sink into your perfect skin, soundlessly erased as if it were never there.
You ARE an idealized version of yourself, and you're getting worse and worse every minute.
Choice
Begin looking around for people to interact with.
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
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daddy - ID: 9270
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fishroom - ID: 17431
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guitar boy - ID: 9267
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plectrums - ID: 12215
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bedroompeek - ID: 9274
blowtorch - ID: 18441
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daddy - ID: 9270
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fishroom - ID: 17431
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gf - ID: 9283
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policeroom - ID: 9276
sliding - ID: 9279
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barbecued - ID: 9275
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daddy - ID: 9270
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fishroom - ID: 17431
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guts - ID: 9272
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barbecued - ID: 9275
bedroompeek - ID: 9274
blowtorch - ID: 18441
boi - ID: 133965
chaddy - ID: 9277
daddy - ID: 9270
differentroom - ID: 17460
dumb neighbor - ID: 18442
fishroom - ID: 17431
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gf - ID: 9283
ginger boy - ID: 9269
guitar boy - ID: 9267
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policeroom - ID: 9276
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annalise - ID: 9282
barbecued - ID: 9275
bedroompeek - ID: 9274
blowtorch - ID: 18441
boi - ID: 133965
chaddy - ID: 9277
daddy - ID: 9270
differentroom - ID: 17460
dumb neighbor - ID: 18442
fishroom - ID: 17431
funny65645 - ID: 98893
gf - ID: 9283
ginger boy - ID: 9269
guitar boy - ID: 9267
guts - ID: 9272
hair - ID: 125750
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mirror wall - ID: 9281
plectrums - ID: 12215
policeroom - ID: 9276
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trail end - ID: 18704
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wet clothes - ID: 12216
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barbecued - ID: 9275
bedroompeek - ID: 9274
blowtorch - ID: 18441
boi - ID: 133965
chaddy - ID: 9277
daddy - ID: 9270
differentroom - ID: 17460
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fishroom - ID: 17431
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gf - ID: 9283
ginger boy - ID: 9269
guitar boy - ID: 9267
guts - ID: 9272
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