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The Adventures of Greene Shmokalotte
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Greenshmoka
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You hop out your bed as fast as you can and jump in your dads face. Just as you begin to yell the 1st of many phrases you alwyas say under your breath he reaches back and cracks you right in your nose. Not expecting it you are stunned and fall to the ground. He begins to kick you while laughing uncontrollably. After a few mins the pain stops and the sparatic white flashes are overrided w/ a contant white. You drift to a place so peaceful it could only be a dream. She is there; looking at you with a wry smile. As you notice something is wrong your mood shifts from calm and comfortable to a nervous and anxiety-laden existance. She reaches out to you and takes your hand, never looking in your eyes. "its all over now" she says. you are barely able to mutter: "but how?.. why?.. i thought we were..." She looks into your eyes for the 1st time "it doesnt matter anymore, everything's gone" and with that you suddenly awake, lying on your floor. The taste of blood lingers in your mouth. You try to get up but collapse back down in pain. "What happened" you think to yourself. After a few moments you are able to get up and look around, your room looks as messy as ever... but something catches your eye. You see a pair of work boots slightly sticking through your partially opened door. They look like your father's.
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