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Extend the Story - Add a Room
THE Make Up Story
by
TobyTheDog
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A Nerdy man with freakles, big glasses, underwear on the outside of his pants, and pocket protector comes from the air.
He melts the cops with his x-ray vision.
What do you do?
Choice
Thank Him
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
No Room Link
old man alert - ID: 16730
start - ID: 16716
ID: 17012
ID: 17011
ID: 17010
ID: 16905
ID: 16904
ID: 16902
ID: 16897
ID: 16896
ID: 16811
ID: 16810
ID: 16771
ID: 16770
ID: 16769
ID: 16768
ID: 16765
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