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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Experimental Factors
by
Angel624
Previous Room
"So," you say, "What was up with that back there?"
Angel seems a little confused. Sparky quickly translates into her language.
"Oh, that?" she says, "I have been trying to get back to my love for many weeks. You were the only way out."
"So, you saved me for yourself?"
"Naga." She points to Sparky, and continues, "I tricked and transformed this one once. I feeled bad. I want to make better."
"What do you mean by transformed?" you ask.
Angel rummages through your backpack and finds a notebook and a pencil. She quickly writes these words down:
Acoota chimitro eegala nomongo.
Naga tonala egatchan amutra.
"What do they mean?" you ask.
"Is my song," Angel replies, "I sing, others are turned bad. Not work on idiot and one love."
"Who is this 'one love' you keep on talking about?"
Angel grabs your Database and clicks on a picture. She shows it to you.
The picture is Stitch.
"You're in love with Stitch?" you say.
"He was in love with me, so I return, even though I trick."
This is getting interesting! Should you continue talking, or just shut up and take Slugger and Angel to Lilo's house?
Choice
Shut up
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
No Room Link
bad choice - ID: 18519
brave thing - ID: 18520
cannonball - ID: 16695
catch it - ID: 20779
clip - ID: 16706
escape - ID: 16467
experiment room - ID: 38006
fight - ID: 16621
glug - ID: 16696
got one - ID: 16697
gotcha - ID: 16623
ha ha ha - ID: 16618
high tide - ID: 18406
hiya - ID: 16620
kiddnapped - ID: 16465
learning more - ID: 16371
more info - ID: 16624
nope - ID: 16707
not sure - ID: 16619
scar and song - ID: 18522
slushy - ID: 18518
the first one - ID: 16455
trouble - ID: 16514
two for one - ID: 16473
whoops - ID: 18407
yay sirs 35000 - ID: 16650
you catch kixx - ID: 16622
you start - ID: 16472
you the spy - ID: 16460
your mission - ID: 16368
ID: 135222
ID: 135221
ID: 135220
ID: 135219
ID: 135218
ID: 135217
ID: 128959
ID: 18521
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