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The Middle Mary Sue
by
Twiggy
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You start to walk across the springy grass towards the river, with a cool breeze blowing in your face and the sun beating down on your head. At first the sensation is pleasant, after the dank, close forest, but after a little while it becomes uncomfortable as you feel your pale skin begin to fry.
Sweat beads on your forehead, and your mouth feels sticky with the horrid taste of thirst. You start to jog toward the water.
You are still moving, but have slowed to an exhausted walk, by the time the sun starts to sink below the cotton-candy clouds. You pause for a moment to catch your breath and watch the sunset, and a pang of guilt hits you as you think of Goldflower and Esmyralda, no doubt wrapped in silk with their fluids sucked out by now. The thought makes you feel sick.
The wind starts to pick up, and a lonely-sounding howl echoes from across the river. You shiver, telling yourself it is only with the cold. But stillÂ…
It is dark now, and you have a choice: should you try to rest out here, exposed in the open, or should you press on towards the waterÂ… and the wolves?
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Story Continues With Choices
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arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
No Room Link
arachnophobia - ID: 15974
chicken - ID: 15973
chicken mk 2 - ID: 16270
death by spider - ID: 16173
escape the forest - ID: 15987
howling mad - ID: 16273
mirkwood river - ID: 15975
muahaha die spiders - ID: 16174
save or scarper - ID: 15978
saving goldflower - ID: 16314
shoulda read hobbit - ID: 15977
sneaky - ID: 16377
spawns of shelob - ID: 15972
the house - ID: 16122
ID: 16316
ID: 27974
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