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Extend the Story - Add a Room
the choice and the chance
by
one0Fones
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" i am volhart"
"oh...th-..the wise?!!" she said in a little excitement
his expressions changed "i don't know where did that name come from.but i guess i will live with it ..willingly or unwillingly"
she felt that he is angry about something " sir..." she seemed to struggle "i.."
he cut her " save the effort ..i am not going to attend anyways"
"but...i -" she looked in the ground in great worry then tried to be cheerful "but the king got good news!" .
"i know what he is going to say.he will distribute the kingdom among us.i don't want that.i just want to live simple life. i want to discover the world and meet people and learn!"
she didn't know what to say "s- sir..it's important to at-"
he cut her and looked at her "you are MY servant now"
she replied in obedience "yes. i am sir"
he noticed she felt sad about his way " cheer up! that means you are totally free to do whatever you want!"
"thank you sir..but."
he cut her"don't worry you are still MY servant " and he laughed.
she is not used to get comfortable around people , but for some reason , she felt safe around him. she knew he was weird. but she also understood him.
"can i ask you just one thing?" he said in firmness and paused like he was expecting a reaction from her.
"what ,sir?"
"do you know what being MY servant means?"
she hesitated and got very confused about how shall she reply "w-what-t?",he noticed in instant that she returned to her worried state
he made a laugh and said "to work for me , not someone else , not the king ..not anyone else."
she nodded her head .
"now i need to leave the palace , before the king , my father forces his authority over me ...he needed me a lot of times ,i know he still needs me , but i need to live"
she stood looking at the ground in silence.
"you understand what i am saying...can you talk ,i know you. i need you to talk out loud..you can take that as an order if you wont"
"y-you want that??!! ....okay!!" she replied
he got surprised but happy about her unusual confidence
"i gave my oath to the king , not you ...in fact ...i ."
"and she started to stutter again .." volhart said in disappointment, but that gave her more courage.
"i am a soldier , not a servant..i."
he cut her" I KNEW IT!!" he shouted
"i told you i know who you are..NOW.. talk to me as a soldier , not as a fukin servant.." he said in a tone of respect and appreciation.
"thank you sir....my oath was to your father , and the orders was to be your guardian.i will follow where you lead sir"she replied
"i am glad being either your servant or your soldier" she continued
he looked at her with a keen look "i dont need that..i have plenty of those.i just want a friend . a companion during my journey" he said
"i cant t-"
he cut her" will you take that obligation or shall i find someone else?"
she sighed and replied obediently "okay.." as she had no choice.
he laughed out loud and said "don't worry , i will be a good friend"
she smiled then thought for a while and said "what's the plan then?!"
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demanish story - ID: 120314
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demanish story - ID: 120314
its just that my - ID: 120368
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loyards entrence - ID: 120367
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its just that my - ID: 120368
its probably i am - ID: 120370
loyards entrence - ID: 120367
the beining - ID: 120313
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demanish story - ID: 120314
its just that my - ID: 120368
its probably i am - ID: 120370
loyards entrence - ID: 120367
the beining - ID: 120313
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ID: 120666
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demanish story - ID: 120314
its just that my - ID: 120368
its probably i am - ID: 120370
loyards entrence - ID: 120367
the beining - ID: 120313
ID: 120369
ID: 120665
ID: 120666
ID: 179211
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demanish story - ID: 120314
its just that my - ID: 120368
its probably i am - ID: 120370
loyards entrence - ID: 120367
the beining - ID: 120313
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