Extend the Story - Add a Room

Deja-Vu by NCPolice55571
Ahh what the hell how much worse can this shit get, you think.

"Hey tuff guy!" you yell as you clench your fist and crack it cold against his concrete jaw.

You feel your wrist just snap. Owww then a loud explosion type sound. YOu look around as people are staring over you on the bus the big starts laughing as smoke exits the barrell of his gun.

You grab down to your stomach and feel a warm red liquid ooze onto your hand. He shot you, that son of a bitch shot you.

Then a loud bang is heard once more as you look up and see the big man's smile disappear and his eyes freeze upon as he falls now lying next to you staring into his dead eyes.

You slowly see the inside of the bus grow darker and darker until that same dead stare overcomes your own eyes.
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End Of Story

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