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Bug Eyes View
by
Quicxk
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You hyperventilate as you can't think of anything. In a blind panic, you run to the end of the shoe. Nathaniel tips it over, and you go falling down to the end, where his toes would be if he chose to put it on.You can see his massive hand as he pulls back the cover of his shoe and looks in, laughing as soon as your eyes meet. "This is wayyy better then what I had in mind!" He cries, and tips the shoe over in the opposite direction. You tumble downwards, stopping right in the center of the shoe--where the bridge of his foot would be. He slips his socked foot in, making sure not to push you back to the front. The smell of cheesy teen boy feet intensifies as the foot wholly envelops you, trapping you in a smelly, hot, sweaty darkness.
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Nathaniel weight lifts in his garage with you in his shoe.
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