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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Blissful Oblivion
by
Sapphire13
Previous Room
I let out a resigned sigh and followed him into the dark hole. The stone doors ground shut, and with a clunk, all of the light disappeared and dust rained down on my hair.
I felt a hand brush against mine, then grasp it. "Just follow me," he said.
We trudged downward through darkness for what felt like hours, until he stopped.
"Close your eyes. Please, just trust me."
Easier said than done, but whatever. I closed my eyes, and he led me forward a few steps, until violently yanking me down and forward. I fell facefirst into what felt like freezing water, and I thrashed and struggled for all I was worth. Was he really trying to drown me?
He continued to pull me forward, until we rose and surfaced. "What," I sputtered, "the fuck." I was treading water, and I looked at him in the dim light that seemed to have no source.
"I'm sorry, but I never would have gotten you to come in here if I told you you'd have to swim in freezing water. Would you?"
"No! Of course not! Are you out of your-"
"Hey," He interrupted, "Would you rather get eaten alive back there?"
I fell silent.
"Come on," He said, pulling me forward. "My home is just ahead. We can get freshened up and then I'll explain everything."
Hmph. What kind of guy lives in a cave with the only entrance through a water pool?
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attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
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ID: 121572
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attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
No Room Link
attack him - ID: 121273
cry out - ID: 121303
hostage - ID: 121275
let it have her - ID: 121302
lost opportunities - ID: 121308
morpheus - ID: 121307
run - ID: 121268
ID: 121300
ID: 121301
ID: 121299
ID: 121277
ID: 121304
ID: 121305
ID: 121276
ID: 121223
ID: 121311
ID: 121312
ID: 121313
ID: 121315
ID: 121316
ID: 121572
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