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the Ring and the Veil
by
PandaRose
Previous Room
Ah, no matter the times, her wedding is still maybe the biggest day in any girl's life. You rise early, to get your hair done for the final time, recheck your nails, confer with your younger sister about what is to be done.
You are Penelope Jenna Penderghast, elder daughter of the Penderghast family, shipping moguls of the East Coast, and today is your day.
You can't resist a whirl around your bedroom with your Vera Wang wedding gown held up to your slim, graceful torso; soon you will be sewn into it.
Everything, everything comes true today, everything you ever dreamed. Your mother could not be more exuberant, your father more proud, all your friends are in turns gushing like fountains or steaming with envy.
Plus you have a secret only your best friend knows.
Most of all, one fact is integral to the ceremony, its revealing to change everything.
Choice
You're actually pregnant with the gardener's baby
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
No Room Link
bailing his - ID: 104215
behind the scenes - ID: 104225
centerpiece - ID: 104227
cutting edge - ID: 104224
high drama - ID: 104209
love in bloom - ID: 104219
man woman other - ID: 104216
newest member - ID: 104228
no good reason - ID: 104218
no way jose - ID: 104221
passion - ID: 104211
penelope - ID: 104212
piginapoke - ID: 104222
reginald - ID: 104214
sands of time - ID: 104226
set the scene - ID: 104207
small town secrets - ID: 104213
stuff needed - ID: 104223
the high road - ID: 104208
the two most vital - ID: 104210
triple crown - ID: 104220
unseen party - ID: 104217
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