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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Simplicity
by
NightshadeX9
Previous Room
You scuttle back, back against the wall, then turn, flee, praying you'll find one of the ventilation holes. Not easy, they're on your tail and you run, run, getting barely ahead of them. "Hey, you! Stop!"
"You think you can make trouble, hunh?!" ring out together, not that you're sticking around for a formal introduction. All you've got on your side is speed and surprise, and you've already lost one.
The hall twists, the lights uncertain, and already you've lost your bearings, but still you run.
Just as they round a corner you dive into what seems like an irregular opening, barely curling yourself up in time to avoid the angry pounding feet. They storm pass, "This way, Sully! I think he ducked down there!" as you catch your breath.
Okay, not the best start. But frankly anyone wandering around down here is probably not going to be friendly. Time to get your bearings.
This tunnel's rather narrow, but it might be worth wriggling through, if you don't mind the pitch black. Still, if you flee now, you just might find a safe place, as they're going to notice your absence any minute. That is, if you can find your way at all.
"Where'd he go?" "I dunno, he just disappeared, we'd better..." but it's just a bit too faint. Uh-oh, sounds like they're coming back, and you know you'd better not stay here. Okay, think fast.
Choice
Squirm through the narrow tunnel.
Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
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cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
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nameless - ID: 102558
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No Room Link
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cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
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ID: 102564
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ID: 101843
No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
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ID: 102564
ID: 102563
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ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
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No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
ID: 102599
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ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
ID: 102599
ID: 117723
ID: 102601
ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
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cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
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ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
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ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
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cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
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ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
ID: 102599
ID: 117723
ID: 102601
ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
ID: 102599
ID: 117723
ID: 102601
ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
ID: 102586
ID: 102587
ID: 102599
ID: 117723
ID: 102601
ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
ID: 101873
ID: 101843
No Room Link
agreements - ID: 102624
cluekey - ID: 102565
gropingclue - ID: 102557
keepmoving - ID: 102566
nameless - ID: 102558
office decision - ID: 102602
tunnelmeeting - ID: 102569
ID: 102600
ID: 102584
ID: 102585
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ID: 102601
ID: 102704
ID: 101841
ID: 102583
ID: 102582
ID: 102581
ID: 102564
ID: 102563
ID: 102562
ID: 102559
ID: 102216
ID: 102215
ID: 101874
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ID: 101843
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