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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Universe
by
Dan2
Previous Room
You gaze out towards the remaining beach dwellers who have been shuffled down the beach by some Ela'Derhn staff. You smirk to yourself. Ah, Universal Citizens. Gotta love them. Even when there have been reports of fatal disease going around at other resorts, that's not enough to make them cancel their vacation dates. You turn to Selena.
"I'm gonna go talk to some of them," you say.
She nods, gazing at you in mysterious awe. "Do you want me to come with?" shes asks.
You shake your head. "I'll be alright for now Selena, thanks."
She winks. "I'll meet up with you later then."
You head down the beach towards the sight, sound, and smell of lifeforms. You pass a couple Boulbaas: large, floating jellyfish-like specimens. They converse in deep voices (about philosophy you're sure) as they hover ten feet over the ocean surface and emit thin smelly vapors from their tendrils. You also walk past a family of Urevers, not being able to help but be fascinated at the way their species grew genetically. The parents, easily identifiable due to being seven feet tall, gathered around about twenty children who were probably only one foot each. The kids would grow rapidly during their pubescent stage, a fact you find surprising you remembered from your Alien Genetics 400 Class.
You also pass many species of aliens on the beach you are fairly familiar with: Beehns, Pohjans, Murandos, Jarnee, Mavi, and others. You try to identify a couple people who seem worth talking to, identifying characteristics taught to you in the Academy to determine who is significantly riled by the puking event. After walking a few more minutes, you see a couple humans having a fight. Two guys about your age by the looks of them.
You also noticed an old Terell man who kept making your eye. He gave you the impression that he knew something.
There's also a really cute Koni girl smiling at you.
Choice
Talk to the cute Koni girl
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Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
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Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
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a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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No Room Link
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 95222
ID: 94803
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
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No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
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No Room Link
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
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ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
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ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
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