Extend the Story - Add a Room

My writing there sucked, did it not?


You hear a noise of the kitchen, as if someone is pouring cereal from a box. Observing the kitchen you watch as your accomplice hastily pours your dry, expired cereal into his mouth, his rotten teeth biting quickly into the fat chunks. Frowing, you wonder if letting him into your house was such a good idea. His idea of consumption is expired cereal, and devours it like something primitive. Your worries are soon over, as you watch in delight as he leans over the kitchen side, choking, gagging for air as one single, or multiple pieces remain stuck in his throat. Your morale is so low that you don't even know what to do..He's a dirty, rotten piece of shit that comes from somewhere close to India, and he definetly needs a Dental Checkup. Perhaps you should've spared him a tic-tac or two?

He may be essential to your schemes. Yet, he deserves to rot like the teeth he possesses.

He begins to desperately cry for help, but only splutters over your kitchen..Dirty son-of-a-bitch...Save his 'life', or allow him to die?

Allow him to die