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The Oddball Odyssey Part Choose-Your-Own by Gorloche
Smoke arises where a being has fallen, as if Lucifer has once again fallen to earth again. Among the rubble, a hand reaches up, reaching for the air above. Onlookers are unwary, until there is a loud crunch, as the rubble is destroyed like an egg. Pulling himself up is a tall figure, that appears unafraid of the smoke that has seemingly separated him from the rest of the world. The being walks through it. His hood lowered...

To reveal the resemblance of the Monk himself...
(Oh my God what a twist..! ???)


The Monk's son continues to walk down the narrow pathway, which intersects through a huge population of beautiful flowers. He inhales through his nostrils and continues his journey, still ashamed for betraying his father, his family, the Temple! He cannot stand what he has done. As if he had been possessed he had obliberated the Temple, and fought his own father! The only being to actually truly trust him and love him with all his soul and heart.


Where does the son go?
The City
End Of Story

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