Extend the Story - Add a Room

You faint, completely destroyed by the innocence that has been obliterated, your cheeks flush into a shade of beetroot red, then fall back into your chair, completely unconsious.



Your innocence that the naked woman had destroyed, appears to have come back to haunt you, you never awaken.




You eventually do awaken, except, you do upon a cloud, staring at tall pecular golden gates. It should have been obvious to where you was, but instead,you ponder the meaning of existance, ruling out the fact that Heaven could possibly exist. You pick yourself up, staring at the soft plush ground beneath your feet, then you walk up to the gate.
There's a small device on the middle of the gate, it seems it's a scanner or some sort, you place your fingers upon it, to be rewarded with words of disapprovement. "ACCESS DENIED."

You're pushed by an invisible force, into a void of black-nothingness. Then, to be replaced with the huge cute, plush clouds, have formed red-bricked concrete, the atmosphere is heated, rather than that cooling effect Heaven had, the eerie silence. This area is distinct from where you were previously founded. Instead of the tall red gates, you're welcomed by a rock forming an upside down 'U,' Like an old graveyard, you walk through it, and out of nothing, appear the words, 'ACCESS ACCEPTANCE. HELL AWAITS YOU. PLEASE ENTER.' You reluctantly step foward, with no choice anyway, because now, a dark creature blocks the path back.


The mist separates to reveal the true form of Hell. Men and woman, whipped by whips, the end of the whips are blades, quivering with molten fury, they've obviously been heated into that point of melting, then, used, still connected to the bull-whips, enormous pain being inflicted upon a single target. What a pleasuring experience, eh? You back away from the choked screaming coming from the people that are being tortured, you watch, a few metres away, someone with the experience of being teared open, literally like an orange, blood gushes and oozes everywhere, you cover your eyes, grimacing in despair, yet sadness and disgust. How could these people do this!?

You were forced to wait in a long que of people, to await your torture method...

Flee!