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Can you juggle your teenage life? by happyhak
You walk down to the bus stop. On your way there, you wonder why Tamsin was acting so weird. You never really interact with her.

After five minutes of walking, you start to approach the bus stop. You see Tamsin there but she doesn't see you. You walk to the bus stop.

Tamsin is sitting down. She still cannot see you. She sighs heavily then moves her hair from her eyes. She then pats her chest. She now realises that she has lost her necklace.

Tamsin: "No! My necklace!"

She gets up and turns around to run back but she bumps in to you again. This time, she doesn't fall over but she turns really nervous again.

Tamsin: "Oh, um...Hi..."

You can see she is breathing heavily again.

You: "Um, hey. Your necklace..."

You hand it out to her.

You: "You dropped it when you ran off, I thought I should return it to you"

You were still handing it out because she wouldn't take it. She just stood there, speechless and nervous. You look confused.

You: "Umm...here. I'm giving it back to you...Don't you want it?"

She doesn't answer.

You: "Well...I don't really want to keep what is yours so..."

You lean forwards towards her and you put the necklace around her neck. As you do this, you hear her squeal a bit.

You: "There. I have to say, that is a really beautiful necklace. Where did you get it?"

Tamsin: "Oh, um...errr..."

You could hear her voice shaking. You worry about her.

You: "Tamsin, are you ok?"

Tamsin: "Y-yeah! I'm ok!"

You: "Are you sure?"

You are really concerned about her.

Tamsin: "I'm fine"

You still are not convinced that she is fine.



3 minutes late, a bus starts coming down. As it stops, you and Tamsin get on it. You sit down on your own with an empty seat next to you and you just look out the window. You see Tamsin sitting about 5 rows behind you.

5 minutes later, the bus stops and a girl your age gets on. It looked like she was about to sit next to you. As this happened, Tamsin rushed to the seat next to you and sat down.

Tamsin: "Italy!"

You look confused.

You: "Huh?"

Tamsin: "My-my necklace...You wanted to know where I got it...I got it from Italy..."

You could hear her voice shaking a little bit. Not as much as at the bus stop but it was still shaking. She was little out of breath too. Either that or she was really nervous.
"Well, well, well! Looks like you got your voice back! Ha ha! You seemed seriously blank at the bus stop!"
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