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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Universe
by
Dan2
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As much as you want to help these poor Chikari slaves, you realize that it really isn't the reason you were sent here and the most important thing right now is that you escape safely to complete your mission. You reason that once you succeed many more Chikari will be helped than just these ones here. But as you start to run away through the woods, you hear the sounds of gunfire and Chikari screams behind you. With a sinking feeling, you can't help but think that you have failed these people.
After an hour, you wind up out of the woods and on the brink of a plain. You walk for another two hours until to your relief, you finally see the outpost of Bak'ra'da in front of you. Excitement washing away the sadness inside you, you begin a brisk pace towards the shabby buildings with a newfound energy. You were supposed to meet your contact Nor here when you arrived a few days ago, you can only hope that he has waited around for you.
As you enter the outpost, you immediately sense that something is wrong. Sniffing the air, something smells distinctly vile, a smell more grotesque than anything you've ever experienced before. To your horror, as you look to your right you see a body lying out on the muddy ground.
You walk up to the body and turn it over and see it's a dead Mavi. The Mavi are an amphibious species, with webbed features and large, gaping eyes. You can tell this man has been dead for a while by the way his webbing has crusted over, leaving his corpse looking particularly disgusting.
You stand up from the body and look around the outpost, scanning for any signs of life. You see none. Now feeling a deep fear growing within you, you begin to check in and out of all the shabby buildings in the outpost, seven in total. In each one you find a grotesque scene of more dead aliens of all shapes and sizes. Finally, you stop in the middle of the dirt path and vomit. You've never felt so sickened in your whole life.
So the whole outpost has been massacred. You need to leave here as soon as possible, the sickening feeling is driving you crazy. Where should you go?
Choice
Go out into the wilderness
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a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
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No Room Link
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activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
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juks tavern - ID: 86160
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meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
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your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
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beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
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juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
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secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
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the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
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galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
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your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 182116
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activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
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beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
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No Room Link
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 95222
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 182116
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ID: 95222
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ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
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ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
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ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
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ID: 71797
No Room Link
a tour of cathala - ID: 86342
a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 124515
ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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ID: 71797
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