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by
Dan2
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You decide that the best move for now is to just stay put, go along with captivity, and take note on as much as you can. The other Chikari continue to give you strange looks but for the most part you are completely ignored. You reason that these people are probably scared of you.
Two days go by, both of which you spend laboriously chopping down trees and working in the fields harvesting fruits. The days are hot, muggy, and you realize towards the end of the second day that you have been in an almost constant sweat. Your slavers feed you two meals a day, once in the morning and once in the afternoon. They never present the food (mostly nuts and such) directly into your hands; rather, they simply throw it at the feet of you and the rest of the slaves.
During these two days, you are able to obtain a much deeper understanding of the way slaving is treated on Chista and through this, you start to develop plans as to how and stop the institution. As soon as you can break out of here, you hope that you may see one of these plans through to fruition.
On the third day, it happens. You are wading in a murky river, along with five other Chikari slaves. Your current assignment is to harvest as much seagrass as you can, for apparently your slavers can harvest the substance into fuel. All of a sudden a large moan is heard from the water. The Chikari look around wide-eyed at each other, every person terrified.
A Slabreth slaver is standing on the bank of the river with his gun loaded and aimed at your group. "Keep working!" he shouts and then fires a warning shot into the river.
Then before you can even comprehend it, a large slimy body whips from the river bed and lunges its face full of sharp teeth directly at the Slabreth. He screams and fires another shot, but it is a futile attempt; he is devoured less than two seconds later.
The river beast, a large grotesque worm-type thing, lets out a long howl and dives back down underwater. You and the other Chikari waste no time and hurry to the bank of the river, where you struggle up the muddy side.
Standing at the top, you and the other slaves take long deep breaths. You hear shouting in the distance and realize that more slavers are on their way.
Now is your chance to escape. But are you better off going alone..or taking the Chikari with you?
Choice
Escape with the Chikari
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Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
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chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
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meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
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juks tavern - ID: 86160
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spacers hostel - ID: 96979
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Terell man - ID: 110017
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the monzy inn - ID: 86457
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juks tavern - ID: 86160
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secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
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the monzy inn - ID: 86457
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travel to weyah - ID: 86301
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galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
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your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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activity grounds - ID: 86110
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beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
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secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
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beginning - ID: 71794
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caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 95222
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ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 182116
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ID: 95222
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
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arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
ID: 115181
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ID: 132631
ID: 182125
ID: 182116
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ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
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ID: 86109
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ID: 83838
ID: 83836
ID: 71797
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 95222
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a tour of eladerhn - ID: 86607
activity grounds - ID: 86110
arrival in baraza - ID: 86165
arriving at tro - ID: 86108
beachtime - ID: 96939
beginning - ID: 71794
Cafe incident - ID: 96934
caught by slavers - ID: 83749
chista beginning - ID: 71829
escaping by yourself - ID: 86804
galakos invitation - ID: 86119
juks tavern - ID: 86160
Medical bay - ID: 182089
meet minister ryol - ID: 86577
polola circle - ID: 97080
Resort lobby - ID: 71821
secret in the garden - ID: 86764
spacers hostel - ID: 96979
sukhan beginning - ID: 71820
Terell man - ID: 110017
the first plan - ID: 86194
the monzy inn - ID: 86457
travel to oru - ID: 72136
travel to weyah - ID: 86301
Two guys on beach - ID: 182117
your room at zaura - ID: 84799
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ID: 132631
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ID: 182116
ID: 96214
ID: 95222
ID: 94803
ID: 94774
ID: 86220
ID: 86109
ID: 86094
ID: 83838
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