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Prison Escape
by
Bradenh02
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The Yerxes Cargo Transport Vessel leaves Earth and heads to the Renai Penal colony which was 2 weeks away. Of course, thanks to being in Cryogenic stasis, the prisoners thought it was only 5 minutes.
The Yerxes arrived on Ranus IV and all the guards were awoken before the Prisners, and when the prisoners were awoken, they were kept enclosed in the Cryo Chambers.
1 by 1, each prisoner was was let out of their chambers and directed towards the entrance to the Renai Penal colony. Then, the guards arrived at Chamber 25.
'Commander, would you like the honors?' asked one of the guards.
'I would indeed Treyfus.'
Commander Frey walked up to prisoner 25 and pressed a button on the wall beside him.
'Well, Prisoner. Here we are. Renai Penal Colony, Planet Ranus IV. Do you have anything to say before we let you meet your new surroundings.'
The Prisoner stood there his mouth trembling with fear, hatred, and sadness.
'I guess not. Right, Jimbo, take him away.'
'Aye, sir,' Replied jimbo, then instructing 2 other guards, they grabbed the prisoner and led him towards his new home for life.
The prisoner watched in awe as the guards led him to an extremely high building made of stone, marked by scorching heat from the Planets sun. He continued looking up until noises from ahead came out of the building.
The prisoner stared shaking uncontrollably.
'Stop moving, Prisoner or you'll get zapped.'
The prisoner tried to stop shaking, but it was hopeless. He was frightened more than he had ever been before.
'Sgt. Samuels. Zap him,' commanded Jimbo.
The prisoner looked at Sgt. Samuels as he got zapped. He squeeked in pain, then fell to his knees.
'Get up, shithead.'
The prisoner stood up fearing another zap.
'We have almost arrived at your new home. You are gonna love this place. Some of the bastards here, prisoner, are cannibals. Some know the ins and outs of this place. Some know who the corrupt guards are, and some just like to have a little fun if you know what I mean?'
'Are you co...co...corrupt?' Stuttered the prisoner.
'hehehe,' laughs Jimbo.
'You better know it! And prisoner, if you think me being corrupt is gonna save yo sorry ass, then you are wrong.'
The Prisoner drops his head, more scared than before and watches the entrance as he walks through it. Inside, prisoners were evrywhere. They were just watching all the 25 new arrivals. The prisoner could hear prisoner saying things like:
'Mmmm. new meat. May taste nice,' 'Yo gonna die new blood,' 'Hey mannn, you wanna way outtt? I'll know one if you give me some moneyyy...'
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sector 7 dash 8 9 - ID: 72440
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ID: 82868
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