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Death Note
by
DeathNote
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It was the next day, Kazuo woke up to find Ryuk had been trying to turn on the tv. "Kazuo, how do you..." said Ryuk. "Not now Ryuk, we have too much to do. First we need to go to PIPOr's house" said Kazuo, as he got ready to leave. "Huh? fine, but I need an apple" said Ryuk as they left Kazuo's house. "OK then, we'll get one on the way there" said Kazuo, as they walked down the street. They got to the fruit shop and Kazuo brought the first apple he saw, and gave it to Ryuk. "I wonder if I should give PIPOr back her Death Note if she is better today?" thought Kazuo, as he walked down the street. Kazuo could see PIPOr's house, Gizou walked out of the wall. "Good, you're finally here, this place has been boring lately, she won't say anything" said Gizou.
"Are you sure she didn't give up ownership of the Death Note?" asked Ryuk, as he walked into the house. "No she hasn't, the owner of the Death Note needs to tell the shinigami" said Gizou. "Oh yeah.. that right" said Ryuk. "Hello PIPOr" Kazuo said when he entered the house. "Hello... Kazuo-kun" said PIPOr. "She still sounds sad, but not as bad as before" thought Kazuo. "Are you ready to use the Death Note?" asked Ryuk. "....Yes.... For Kira...." said PIPOr. "Really?" said Kazuo holding out her Death Note.
PIPOr looked up at the Death Note. "Hai" she said, taking the Death Note back. "I've learnt from my mistake, and I'll never do it again" said PIPOr. "Keh keh keh keh keh! She got over it pretty fast, didn't she?" said Ryuk. "I can't sit around doing nothing. I should be helping Kira" said PIPOr. "Good, but Gizou won't be following you for this one" said Kazuo. "What?" said Gizou. "Gizou, I need you to go to Z's building, and find out if he has any back up. If he does you can kill them straight away, don't kill Z, Near or anyone on the investigation team. Also Z's name is Zilos Keehl, Near is Nate River. The investigation team are Yamahiko Tanaka, Ai Yamada and Sagara Yamato. These are the people you are not to kill" said Kazuo. "I see, then I'll leave" said Gizou, smiling. "Don't you need to stay with your Death Note Gizou?" asked Ryuk. "That's not a problem" said Gizou as he flew away.
"What does that mean Kazuo?" asked Ryuk. "You're serious? Don't you remember the rules of the shinigami, Near got them off Ryuta" said Kauzo. "I know of the rules, just not all of them. I forget sometimes" said Ryuk, Kazuo looked disappointed. "A shinigami must not stay in the human world without a particular reason, one of the reasons is that they can stay in the human world for 82 hours, to stalk someone with the intention to kill" said Kazuo. "Kazuo, your smartness still surprises me" said Ryuk, who looked shocked.
"Now PIPOr are you ready to continue your mission?" asked Kazuo. "Hai, but Kazuo-kun, could you come with me for this one?" asked PIPOr. "I can't if I do Z will definitely know that there's two Kiras the point of the costume is to make him think there is only one" said Kazuo. "I see... I'll go anyway, Ryuk-san can come" PIPOr said as she ran into the other room. "It looks like she's back to normal" said Kazuo. "I really don't care" said Ryuk. PIPOr ran into the room, wearing a home made Strike Rouge costume. "I see... It looks very well made" said Kazuo, Ryuk was laughing as he and PIPOr left and went to the station. "I'll just use the Death Note here" said Kazuo. "There's our transport Ryuk-san" said PIPOr pointing at the train. "That is called a train" said PIPOr. "I know..." said Ryuk, as they got in the train.
They got off the train when it stopped, they saw Yamahiko walk past. "MISSION: Eliminate target. TARGET: Tanaka Yamahiko. The target is located near-by, additional enemy forces are unknown" said PIPOr. "Keh keh keh keh keh! I see" said Ryuk. PIPOr got out a box and pressed the button on top of it. The box had a screen on it. "What's that?" asked Ryuk. "I brought that off the internet, it does the count down thing before a mobile suit is launched" said PIPOr. "I see...." said Ryuk. "PIPOr, Strike Rouge. Ikuzou!" said PIPOr, running out of the train, with lots of weird stares from everyone near by. "keh keh keh keh keh! By the looks of those people this will be interesting" said Ryuk.
As PIPOr ran, strips of clear blue plastic trailed from the gundam's boosters. "Keh keh keh keh! If only Kazuo could see this" said Ryuk. PIPOr stoped and the blue plastic retracted into the costume. "Oh? That was kind of cool" said Ryuk. "There's the target ryuk-san" said PIPOr writing in her Death Note. "I see, what are you going to do?" asked Ryuk. "Watch" said PIPOr, running with a toy MS beam rifle in her hand. "What the hell?" said Yamahiko, when he saw PIPOr. "Yahhh!" yelled PIPOr, shooting the toy gun, a small piece of green plastic shot out, Yamahiko dodged. "OK, what's your pro..." said Yamahiko, as PIPOr pulled a toy beam sword out of the Strike Rouge's pack. "Haaaa!" yelled PIPOr, as she hit him with it. "Oww... What the hell?" said Yamahiko, as he pulled out his gun. "Alright I've had enough of this crap, put the weapons down, you're under arrest" Yamahiko said pointing the gun at PIPOr, who held the shield in front of her. "Like that toy shield wil..." said Yamahiko, as he collapsed.
"MISSION COMPLETE!" yelled PIPOr. "Keh keh keh keh keh! That was fun" said Ryuk. "Returning to base" PIPOr said as she ran away, towards the station. When they were gone Ai, found Yamahiko and checked his pulse. "Damn.... So that weird person was Kira, I thought Kira would be crazy... But not that crazy" Ai said, as she pressed her belt buckle twice to contact Near.
"I'm back, Kazuo-kun" said PIPOr when they got back. "Good, now you have to hide that costume and never wear it again" said Kazuo. "So Z doesn't find me?" asked PIPOr. "Uh.. Yeah... So Z doesn't find you" said Kazuo. "I'll show you what I wrote" said PIPOr, showing Kazuo how she killed Yamahiko. "Tanaka Yamahiko, 1:15pm. Heart attack. When owned by a Gundam in a fight, after commenting about the mobile suit's shield, he has a heart attack and dies" said Kazuo, reading the Death Note. "That would have been fun to watch, but now we just have to wait for Gizou to come back" said Kazuo, as he wrote in the Death Note. Kazuo's phone rang. "Hello" said Kazuo. "Kazuo this is Z, I have some bad news and some good news. I need you to come here" said Z. "Keh keh keh keh keh! Maybe you'll get to see it after all, and when you do get a copy of it so we can watch it again" said Ryuk.
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