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Death Note
by
DeathNote
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Talk to the shinigami.
"What do you mean you didn't kill her, shinigami! You counted down from 5 and when you finished she died." Yelled Solius furiously. "Keh keh keh keh keh! How do you think I could have known that then, human?" said the shinigami who stared directly into Solius' eyes. "I don't know... You said if I write a name in this book that person will die. How do I know you don't just kill the people after their name is written down. She was old and your crazy costume could have given her a heart attack." said Solius trying to figure out what had just happened. "Keh keh keh keh keh keh keh keh! Well human how many costume have you seen that can do this?" said the shinigami mockingly as it walked through the book shelf and through the walls before dropping in from the ceiling and laughing in Solius' face.
"So you're a real shinigami?" said Solius still a little confused, but shocked at what the shinigami had just done. "Yes" said the shinigami "Do you want proof, human?" the shinigami said this while getting out a black notebook, Solius looked shocked. "Did you think there was only one Death Note?" said the shinigami. "Watch this, go talk to that old man across the street his name is Matsuda Touta." Said the shinigami holding up its notebook. "Ok then but I don't see what this will do" said Solius "My luck just seems to get crappier by the minute now..." he thought as he walked out of the shop."Hello" said Solius to the old man "Hello... uh... What do you want, I'm kind of in a hurry now can I give you my business card and maybe talk to you tomorrow?" said the old man who quickly walked off. Solius read the card "Matsuda Touta.... Talent agent? Ok this is weird the shinigami knew his name?" thought Solius as he read the card while walking back into the shop.
"Keh keh keh keh keh Enjoy your chat with the elderly, human?" said the shinigami when Solius entered the shop. "I have a surprise for you as well" said the shinigami who had the same twisted look of enjoyment it had when th old lady died. The shinigami held up a black notebook "Read this." it said. Solius read the notebook.
"Matsuda Touta 1:00pm Car accident. While walking home from work is stopped to talk to a stranger, after talking to the stranger he gives the stranger a business card with his name. After finishing talking with the stranger he continues to walk accross the street and is hit by a bus." said Solius reading the notebook out loud. "It's 12:59pm now. Does this mean that..." said Solius who was interrupted by a loud crashing sound which came from outside.
"Keh keh keh keh keh Do you believe this is real now?" said the shingami. "So anyone's name I write in will die?" asked Solius, "Yes, just read that how to use page I spent so long re-writing" replied the shinigami. Solius picked up a pen "Finally they can rest" he thought as he started writing in the notebook "So shinigami what should I call you then?" he said while writing.
"Hmm... My name is Ryuk, so I guess you could call me that, B..." said Ryuk who was cut off by Solius. "My name is Kazuo Solius, Ryuk. You can just call me Kazuo" said Kazuo as he finished writing in the notebook. "So Kazuo, What do you plan to do with the power of the Death Note?" asked Ryuk. "I'm going to kill everyone who I think is evil." said Kazuo "Ever since that day I've wanted revenge for what that person did and now that I have gotten my revenge. I'm going to make sure that doesn't happen to anyone else." said Kazuo as he finished a sentence which read "Killed himself after being over-whelmed by guilt for killing two people 20 years ago". "Hmm? What does that mean Kazuo?" asked Ryuk. "I'll tell you later, Ryuk but now I need to deal with that problem by the counter." said Kazuo, pointing at the old lady. "Keh keh keh keh keh The Death Note has changed you quickly hasn't it?" Said Ryuk.
What will you do?
Choice
Call an ambulance and tell what just happened, excluding Ryuk and the Death Note.
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