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Extend the Story - Add a Room
Life After Life
by
mevergreen
Previous Room
I was so angry with my father that I missed what might have been my last chance to speak with him ever. There was an odd shift in my surroundings and then I saw only the lightest of blue skies and cotton clouds under my feet. Slowly I turned to see huge arching pearlescent gates. Beyond them I was certain I glimpsed a castle with many towers stretching high into the sky. All around me doves flew, their wings glittering as if covered in morning dew.
A young man emerged from the gates, coming straight to me. His brown hair framed his face in short curls. His eyes were a deep grey. "Welcome to the Hall of Angels." His smile seemed so genuine I smiled back easily. "I'm Mark, and I'm on gate duty right now." He half rolled his eyes. "You'll learn all about gate duty later. It's a pleasure reserved only for new and low level angels. Everyone does it a lot for the first few years."
"Um, hi." For some reason I found him instantly charming, an effect few guys have on me. It made me all the more cautious. I just felt like no one should have that effect on me.
"Come on in, and I'll set you up with a guide who can show you around and set you up with a room and classes and such."
"Thank you," I followed him through the stunning gates where another boy stood as well, this one with black hair, brown eyes and a slight frown.
"Don't mind Jared, he hates gate duty, so he's in a foul mood," Mark told me cheerfully. I offered Jared a smile, but he just looked away. For some reason I felt like his problem was more personal than Mark had said, but I couldn't think how he'd know enough about me to have a personal problem with me already.
"Now," Mark said, "what would you prefer?"
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Room Description (what happens next)
Continuation Method
Story Continues With Choices
End Story - No Choices
Choices
Variable Names & Values are required for a choice to show
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
No Room Link
caring - ID: 54232
cornered - ID: 53961
crystal - ID: 53954
death - ID: 53953
gay - ID: 53963
great woman - ID: 53958
hate - ID: 53964
hold me - ID: 53965
in a pit - ID: 76475
male roommate - ID: 53955
mastefsin - ID: 53960
my soulmate - ID: 54216
no i mean yes - ID: 53967
oh boy - ID: 53956
ryan - ID: 53959
sleek - ID: 54228
smoke - ID: 53962
touch not talk - ID: 53966
town - ID: 54221
triple goddess - ID: 53968
why jared - ID: 53957
ID: 54226
ID: 54220
ID: 54236
ID: 54254
ID: 54274
ID: 59880
ID: 82446
ID: 97483
ID: 104567
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