Vixen Manor

Comments & Ratings

I agree it is perhaps the best mature level story (except for Days in the Dorm). I hope there are more contributions in the future, since there are many loose ends that leave one wondering what happens next.
by imphic on Dec 19, 2011
Once again some overly offended idiots in this section and the other comments section make dumb ass remarks about "perverted pictures." Christ, there isn't even anyone naked to even qualify as "perverted" let alone something like a picture of a double amputee midget fucking dead goat. Fucking prudes.

And the title "Vixen Manor" should've tipped off the easily offended to not fucking read the damn story in the first place.

Anyway, it's sort of a random story that should've had more structure and description, but it's one of the better sex related stories we have on here.
by EndMaster on Jan 11, 2011
um, i think it would be better without the perverted pictures. just saying.
by superjo16 on Jul 16, 2010
****ing sick pictures. I am only a kid. You must enjoy it though. One question.
by shadowzxv on Jun 21, 2007
by Zericola on Jun 18, 2007
I don't see this story as much more than a man's (or a lesbian's) wet dream. Yeah, it's kind of mysterious and sexy, but at the end of the day it's just sort of...empty. I wish there were more variation to it...and more description as well.
by Vesnicie on Jun 6, 2007
This is a fun story! I've heard a lot about you as a writer, because there aren't many girls around here. I glanced through this story once before but I didn't have time to give it the attention it deserves. Now that I've read more of it I agree with the rest you are great!
by KatieWroteIt on Dec 30, 2006
by adept42 on Aug 20, 2006
by Marshmello on Mar 19, 2006
Love all the really neat pictures!
by Ann on Aug 16, 2005
Celtic, while I respect your writing, I have to say that this is the worst thing I have read from you. Understandably, most of it is not your fault. I also understand that you have a policy to let anyone and everyone add to your story without any real screening. I urge you to rethink this course of action, as it has a tendency to destroy a potentially good story.
by donteatpoop on Aug 15, 2005
Okay, all the hot pictures aside, what is the deal with this story? It doesn't really seem to follow any real cohesive plot-line, the main character (the reader) is portrayed as a man AND a woman (this should've been more obvious), and the jumps from room to room are childishly random.

If it weren't for the moving pictures (and whatever technical expertise is involved with loading one of THEM - I could only imagine), this would be a five. And if not for the pictures of hot chicks, a three. Sorry, it just seemed like a little too much pandering to the baser instincts for brownie points.
by michaelrayholt on Apr 23, 2005
great story... nuff said
by Joebwoy on Mar 6, 2005
The "main character" in this story has no set gender. You may play the main character, create a main character, or just use one that is already created. The fun thing about this sort of story is that there can be MANY "main" characters :)
by CelticFrostQueen on Dec 27, 2004
Great story but im lost. is the main character a man wonam transgender??? whats going on. one time you got a husband next thing you have a hard on....ok i guess were a transgender couple :)
by videogameWriter on Dec 6, 2004
'Interesting' pictures, fun gameplay, and a whole platoon of contributors. NICE!
by Karold on Nov 19, 2004
by Trial on Nov 15, 2004
geat pictures! Yeah!
by jeffisthebest on Sep 13, 2004
Its really good. you should put more 'action' into it instead of just trying to finish the tour and show all of the girls.
by Victoria7 on Jul 8, 2004
This story is a lot of fun, one of the best ones I've seen.
by Lucid on May 24, 2004
by MagicPen on Apr 28, 2004
This is the best story and picture set up i've read so far cool. . .
by MrDuncan on Feb 26, 2004
Nice work first. Very visual, interactive, and amusing.
by Rpgxper on Jan 31, 2004
It most certainly seems well thought out. Fantastic use of pictures also. Enough of variety to keep ya interested, but not so much that it becomes unbearably random.
by CJW on Jan 24, 2004
by lioness1081 on Jan 24, 2004
Good! Has potential. keep writing!
by blazingzenmaster on Jan 24, 2004
So far the tour was okay, but for the price I had to pay to get in to Vixen Manor I am unable to rate the service yet. :)
by NCPolice55571 on Jan 24, 2004
Wow...this story is sure something...I'm going to have to check back later and see if things continue to...um...progress! ;)
by EnderWiggin on Jan 23, 2004

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