Good, bad, I'm the guy with the gun..

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by TheCandyMan on Apr 17, 2011
I'll go with the 6. A lot of the rooms were rushed and you need to add in way more detail, but compared to most of the stuff on this site, you're doing okay. Especially since it's your first story.

On top of that, who doesn't like zombies?!

Cool name by the way.
by YazZMaN on Feb 27, 2011

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