POKEMON
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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YazZMaN![]() |
May 29, 2009 | Basically, I think you need to write using more details and your story doesn't branch enough (although it looks like that might change as the reader progresses). I like the way the beginning of the story is set up, though. Not sure why. Keep at it, dude. |
I'm not a fan of Pokemon, but this story looks okay compared to the other fan fiction on this site. |
Dan2![]() |
May 26, 2009 | Lol, even though I haven't really ever cared for pokemon stories..I like the concept you have of battling. |