Another Monday Morning

Comments & Ratings

Too tucking lazy to write the rest of the story.
by NoCanDo55 on Jan 21, 2016
I read this along time ago. Quality is not an issue - given the history - but others deserve to supplant this.
by Pelyphin on Mar 4, 2015
Funny but unfinished.
by Madbrad200 on May 22, 2014
by Clark on Mar 6, 2013
Been awhile since I've bother rating a story, but given that this is the "first one" I figure I should finally get around to rating it.

This one suffers from a lot of randomness and bad writing or minimalist writing such as getting tons of pages with only about 3 or 4 words on them.

Anyway Hall of Infinite Doors has done a better job at doing what this one set out to do since it relies on a little structure at least.

Still it gets a few points for being the first and inspiring Apoth's hilarious obsessive mad quest to beat the damn thing in size and hits.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
Hall of infinite doors is obviously superior in every way, shape, form, size, texture and or luminosity. But this is still worth reading and adding to occasionally to practice on. It'd be pretty interesting to see what would happen if we really worked on this!
by mayanightstar on Nov 25, 2010
by Midey on Oct 23, 2010
by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
What the hell is with the part with the jelly ben
by cappstv on Jan 19, 2010
by Fezero on Apr 8, 2009
by vancelandow on Mar 14, 2009
its okay
by laco on Feb 5, 2009
Great story. It's huge and has lots of great moments in it. It also has many idiotic rooms made by morons.

Lemonlover definitely gets the biggest idiot award for littering this story with copious amounts of his crap and ending every possibility to intriguing story lines so that no one else can actually give them decent endings. Congrats!
by BringerOfTales on Nov 23, 2008
by Tulips on Dec 4, 2007
Really not very good.
by JJJthebanisher on Oct 27, 2007
Predator King here, I've started work on a sort of remake of this story, does anyone mind if I make it public?
by PredatorKing on Jul 30, 2007
this is my favirate story and is the best story on the site! there is so many choices and so many possibillities that the game never gets old!
by joe60 on Jul 30, 2007
DAMNIT! This story is certainly awesome, but there really needs to be more choices at the start! Maybe a sequel will solve that problem? *Starts winking madly for the next six hours*
by PredatorKing on Jul 29, 2007
It was good, though incomplete, I enjoyed adding to it.
by Armando322 on Jul 17, 2007
Reminds me of a movie i like, nice story.
by Nurmekas on Jun 8, 2007
Hall of Infinite Doors is superior to this work in quality and length. Waste no more time on this poser story, go to the only true collaborative effort worth contributing to!
by apotheosis on Jun 3, 2007
this story is awesome! P.S. go to work, spray the place with 9mm, sit down, kick the cop, use force, use lightsaber, force choke, run, and you have my writing!
by shadowzxv on Apr 25, 2007
Nice story, I like how you can pretty much twist the story however you want.
by PredatorKing on Apr 21, 2007
very good i like this story just wish there were more rooms
by tye44 on Apr 1, 2007
by chaingang2 on Mar 10, 2007
This story is kinda weird! Because I mean if you only look at the beggining then the hippo part your gunna be thinking how did i end up here?
by happyhak on Feb 10, 2007
Well, it is a classic.
by Dan2 on Oct 8, 2006
Terribly random...
Terribly poor writing...
Terribly inane...

Just terrible.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 22, 2006
by apotheosis on Jul 2, 2006
by kpeaches726 on Apr 5, 2006
Boring... sorry but for some reason reading this makes my brain numb...
by Marshmello on Mar 18, 2006
Great
by VodkaLemon on Sep 22, 2005
This is a great story because there are so many contributions and the story branches so randomly that it should appeal to anyone who reads it. There are squirrel's, too, i think.
by algrewehou on May 10, 2005
I didn't give it a 10 because sometimes it lacks in quality. But the overall deepness is amazing. Gets a good rating because quantity does count for something.
by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 19, 2005
I can't even call this a story. The choices and freedom you have makes you feel like you're in Grand Theft auto. Good Work. I hope to reach your level
by Joebwoy on Feb 12, 2005
I have to show respect 4 this one......
by Ratty17 on Nov 27, 2004
by misshale on Nov 17, 2004
by RockNRoll on Nov 6, 2004
I prefer quality over quantity any day
by kieren21 on Oct 23, 2004
Really cool...
by Mechaman on Oct 13, 2004
by Karold on Oct 8, 2004
This story deserves a 10, just because it is so classic.
by packratt5454 on Oct 5, 2004
I cant believe megaman gave it a 1... maybe that's why he got the boot...
by jeffisthebest on Oct 3, 2004
YOU ARE BAD!
by Megamantn on Sep 26, 2004
Very interesting story, where the possibilities are limitless, which is pretty much what this site is about, right? Anyways, your right it does vary, but it just so fun to do whatever the heck you feel like. That's why it's so sad when you run into a dead end. =(
by YazZMaN on Sep 22, 2004
by Douglas on Jul 21, 2004
". . ."

And that's all ah got to say 'bout that.

Great story and great sub stories. Overall, an enjoyable experience. I give it two thumbs up. Up what? Don't ask.
by WarlordRak on Jul 14, 2004
Best story ever
by NamelessOne on Jul 12, 2004
Since it actually isn't mine it is fair that I rate it. This is a classic piece that defines this site. You have the good, the bad and the ugly and put all together you have one incredible masterpiece work of art. You have a sample of everyone from this site and is a great place to stick your foot into the wtaer before jumping in the pool and going swimming. So to all those who contribute this ten belongs to you.
by NCPolice55571 on Mar 25, 2004
Totally random quality depending on who wrote each room. Some is terrible, but other parts are cool. Overall, it's just good mindless fun which you can get lost in.
by Benway on Feb 5, 2004
Undeed, the quality is highly variable. Still, some of it is very good. Some of it is very random. I guess that's what you get with a wide spectrum of contributors.
by CJW on Jan 21, 2004
Not bad, not at all. I have seen better, and I have seen worse. This story is somewhat asmusing.
by Rpgxper on Jan 21, 2004
This is a strange story. I would give it a 7 simply because it is classic (for this site). The quality of writing varies wildly throughout the story, but is at times quite good.
by EnderWiggin on Jan 12, 2004

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