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The House On The Corner

Written by calia386 / G: General Audiences / 5.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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nowyat
nowyat		 Sep 22, 2006
by nowyat on Sep 22, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Jun 6, 2006
You were a total bitch when I tried PMing you with some PRAISE and a TINY AMOUNT of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

You's a bitch...BIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATCH.

*zips up pants* Now let us never speak of this again.

Bitch.

P.S. Yes I am crazy.

Thankssss for asssking!!!!

Bitch.

P.P.S. BITCH!!!!
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jun 6, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 May 18, 2006
In a previous era of infinite-story, this would have been an 8. I'd like to give you an 8, but I can't. The stories here have just gotten so much better.

As DEP said, you have very good description.
by jeffisthebest on May 18, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 May 13, 2006
You have a lot of detail in this story, which is awesome. Detailed storied on this site are hard to come by.

However, one thing put me off in this story, and it was right in the beginning. What kind of government operation is "investigate a mysterious house and see if anyone lives there"?!? And furthermore, what kind of government operation says "Oh, you can bring a friend too if you like"???

Also, I really feel that this could be listed as a horror/thriller since it seems to hold that tension throughout it as you try to find out what the heck is going on with this house. It seems like it has potential to be really scary, so keep working on it.
by donteatpoop on May 13, 2006

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