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Valley Viper

Written by bobbypkp / NR: Not Rated / 5.00 (3 ratings) (3)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 26, 2011
Readable..The plotline was practically coherent..The grammar was good..Spelling...Not exactly perfect. But compared with the things I have spent torturous seconds dealing with, your spelling is great. So I suppose this is about average..Blah, blah, blah..There's yah point. Mmmkay?
by TheCandyMan on Jul 26, 2011
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jun 14, 2005
I don't know if I would go so far as to say it was readable necessarily.
by donteatpoop on Jun 14, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 May 18, 2005
It's a little rough around the edges. Has the potential to be better. Still, it's readable - which is saying alot for around here. Nice job.
by ChubbyTeletubby on May 18, 2005

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