The Last Room

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PerforatedPenguin
PerforatedPenguin
Feb 26, 2021
I'd have to comment. Your story isn't actually horrible, the writing is decent, flavorful in parts, and it's only downfall is the story. There's no exposition, no background, cliche door opener... etc. Other than that, though, this story isn't as bad as the previous guy made it out as.
I do have a thing against rating one's story though...
by PerforatedPenguin on Feb 26, 2021
Jatotz
Jatotz
Feb 16, 2021
STOP RATING YOUR OWN STORIES 5 STARS
by Jatotz on Feb 16, 2021
IamSix
IamSix
Jan 20, 2021
by IamSix on Jan 20, 2021

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