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cardcaptors a new evil
by
jacks
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cardcaptors
ch5 battle for the future
Eli: "What is this vision? I am getting something wrong in past. Sakura and the others are being sealed away after
they had their magic taken from them by Max. Well then I guess it's time for Sakura's daughter and son to go to the past
and stop this. This will be the perfect time. Anyway I was going to start testing her soon."
Soon Sakura's daughter hears a knock at the door.
"Coming!", she yelled.
Sakura jr: "Oh, you must be Eli. Mom told me about you. I dont think I'd be meeting you so soon."
Eli: "I am going to need your help along with Shaoran jr. You see - Max has been set free in the past.
If he's not stopped, then your future will be ruined. He sealed a younger version of your mom and others
in another realm. Only you and Shaoran jr can stop him, but you need help from the me of the past.
I will send you two back in time. If you fail then it will all be over; everything will be ruined,
not only the past but future as well. Noone will have a future if max rules over all."
Sakura jr: "I will save them. Noone who messes with my family gets away with it! Shaoran jr will be here any minute.
I will fill him in on the whole story then."
Shaoran jr: "I am home. Oh, so you're Eli. It's nice to meet you."
Sakura jr: "I have some crazy news, Shaoran jr, and that whole story."
Shaoran jr: "Well then, let's put a stop to them!"
Eli: "Ok, here it goes. I call upon the powers of the day and the night, Sun and Darkness
unleash your might! Release!
I command you to return to your future forms: Ruby Moon and Spinner Sun!
Now portal of time - I command you to open!"
"Now Spinner Sun and Ruby Moon - I'll need you two to use your power to keep it up, so
these 2 can pass through.
Normally only one person may pass through, but with your help the 2 of them can pass
through. Go now! The future is your hands."
Shaoran jr: "We save them, don't worry!"
Sakura jr: "Ya they'll be ok."
Soon they pass through the portal.
Spinner Sun: "Master Eli, do you think they will be able to stop them?"
Eli: "I can't be sure what outcome will be there. It's best to get Jackie and Toby when
they're not with Max.
They are the daughter and son of Sakura and Shaoran, so am sure they'll be fine."
Shaoran jr: "Ok we made it to the past. This is mom's place. Alright, now we just got to find where Eli is."
Sakura jr: "Jackie and Toby are looking for magic, so it will be the best to go after them, since they're not with Max."
Eli: "So you two made it here. I know you were coming. Yes I am the one that sent a message to my future self.
Now you should be able to stop Jackie as your magic is stronger than mom's is at this point in time and as yours shaoran jr."
Toby: "So who should we go over next?"
Jackie: "Huh? I sense someone with stronger magic. They're two of them heading this way.
Their magic is stronger than Sakura's."
Toby: "Is it Eli?"
Jackie: "No it's not him. I can't get a good look at who the two of them are. Oh well, whoever they are
they just made things easier for us. We will take their magic."
Sakura jr: "So we finally found you two. You're going to pay for what you did to my family."
Jackie: "I see ... so I get it. You're Sakura's and Shaoran's future kids. No matter -
we deal with you brats the same way we dealt with them."
Sakura jr: "I don't think so!"
Sakura jr punched Jackie to ground.
Jackie: "It's going to take a lot more than that to beat me!"
Jackie punches Sakura jr in her stomach.
"Augh!", yelled sakura jr, spitting.
Sakura jr: "I won't lose to someone like you! Mom is counting on me."
Sakura jr kicks Jackie.
Sakura jr: "Now I call the powers if my staff. Key of the Star with powers burning bright, reveal the staff and shine your light! Release!
I call upon the power of my star, ancient forces near and far, card transform all your might and draw your power from my light! Star card!
Now force wind - become a rope and tie Jackie up!"
Jackie: "What? I can't stop it! But how? My magic should be stronger than hers."
Jackie was soon tied up.
Toby: "You'll pay for what you did to Jackie!"
Shaoran jr.: "Not so fast, Toby! Mega thunder - Force know my plight, Release the light! Mega thunder force!"
"Aughhhh!", yelled Toby. Jackie gets hit by lighting, then Sakura jr knocked Jackie out
by hitting her in the back of her neck. Sharoan jr knocked Toby out the same way then tied him up.
Sakura jr: "Now to free mom and the others ..."
"I call on the power of my star. Release the sealed gates to the unknown realm!", yelled ]
Shaoran jr. as the portal ripped open,
sending out everyone that was trapped in there.
The 4 were sent out of the portal.
Sakura jr: "Are they ok?"
Eli: "They will be fine, they are just tired. They will wake up soon. Now for the next part..."
What was taken now returns to their owners. Eli chanted the spell to send the powers Jackie and Toby took
back to Sakura and Shaoran and took Jackie's and Toby's magic away.
Eli: "There - it's down! They will no longer be able to free Max ever again. Now we have to seal them away,
but first to free Kero and Yue."
"It's down, Eli! You set us free, but Max may return any minute!" said Yue and Kero.
Eli: "I'll seal him again when he gets here with the help of Sakura's future kids here.
Now we just make sure there are no others that know about Max,
so that's why we make sure he doesn't get set free ever again."
Max: "You ruined everything, Eli! Just like Clow. I see being reincarnated didn't change
you. Now you all pay!"
Shaoran jr: "No, we put a stop to you!"
Sakura jr:"Now it's time for you to pay! Huh? My staff is changing!"
Eli: "Now Sakura jr, your magic has grown stronger. Now we can cast a stronger spell to
seal max away."
Sakura jr:"Right. I call the power of my staff - become the light for my new star card!
Now I'll use my new card: magma heat cage!"
The hot caged formed around Max.
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