Breathe your last Breath

Written by Mydeskiscool / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Lackofmop	Jul 5, 2013	Two words... Bad spelling. by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
TheCandyMan	Sep 26, 2011	Need more be said? Or in your words: Nede mor be sed? by TheCandyMan on Sep 26, 2011
KingMalice	Dec 27, 2009	by KingMalice on Dec 27, 2009
morganmcrmcr	Mar 22, 2006	its kinda boring and the begginig makes no sense by morganmcrmcr on Mar 22, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Oct 9, 2005	These story is pretty poor is stupid is alwase have every single time I read it... by ChubbyTeletubby on Oct 9, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 9, 2005	"Lizzi pretty poor teen is having she alwase hase every single night..." This was my introduction to the story... Sad. Very sad. Not only can you not spell, but apparently you can't make sense either. by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2005
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 27, 2005	'Lizzi Walkes downstaires in her own house' Classic line. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 27, 2005
jeffisthebest	Nov 5, 2004	larn howw 2 sepell by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004
caterpillar	Jan 26, 2004	um. lame. sorry. don't get the stone or the guy with the wings "as you have described" by caterpillar on Jan 26, 2004
CJW	Jan 25, 2004	by CJW on Jan 25, 2004