Life as a superhero/villian

Written by Yaya1314 / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Creeper909	Mar 21, 2015	Come ON. Too many loose ends.(I have meany loose ends in SOME of my stories, but I work on multiple at a time.) You had the right idea, though. Keep working on it! by Creeper909 on Mar 21, 2015
Lackofmop	Jul 5, 2013	It's good so far, but you need to finish it. by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
TheCandyMan	May 27, 2011	Well...think about it, how about not asking if you kept it a secret, and you should finish off this story, not other people, you should at least give the reader the details of the plot, I've helped with a few rooms, but really, you should do this, then give an idea of how to start the story so we've got a better idea, it's pointless if I write the rest of this story. by TheCandyMan on May 27, 2011
squishydemon	Apr 12, 2011	Good job. You have inspired me. You have inspired me to make a story kind of like this. If I do make this story, I will give props to you. by squishydemon on Apr 12, 2011
squishydemon	Apr 12, 2011	What? Come on, this was a REALLY neat concept in my opinion! I was actually having some fun! It's just that a lot of it isn't finished yet. I would love to make something like this. Umm, hello, whoever created this game, I'm gonna steal your idea, okay? Don't worry, if I do make a game like this, I will give props to you. Is that okay? by squishydemon on Apr 12, 2011
TheCandyMan	Mar 25, 2011	This is unfinished and..not a great story lol Well what else did I expect..? by TheCandyMan on Mar 25, 2011