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The Gladiator

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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
Jun 5, 2011
Hey..not bad. I can't exactly give you one flaw, except for the details of the environment, but that's fine because you can visualise it anyway. I can't think of anything bad to give you. Except of course, the fact that it isn't finished. You can't make a story with 93 rooms, only to leave it unfinished. That's one of the only likely problems with this story, I believe this deserves at most, a 7. Nice storywriting. Especially compared with the retarded kids that come onto this site.
by TheCandyMan on Jun 5, 2011
spartan008
spartan008
Dec 19, 2009
I thought this was a pretty good story for the site. Wya better than some of the crap on here. Keep up the good work :)
by spartan008 on Dec 19, 2009

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