Comments & Ratings
|So much unfinished rooms its almost imposible to play.Story is not bad and if you finished it would probably be funny.I would definetly give it a 6 or 7 if you finish a story.|
|Why is it, that, when there's a good, well polished story, Magic just has to give it a low rating...But when it's something as childish as her, she gives it a high rating, I mean, what the fuck?! It just lacks in everything, your grammar was fine, as was your spelling but it was pretty uninteresting.|
|Very cool story and hard to forget. I just wish it was finished!|
The writing's okay and your grammar is pretty good, too. Get's a seven because the story was kind of random and I didn't really get pulled into it.|
I think you can do a lot better.