a random story about a cat named sparky
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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demyxroxs123 |
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Feb 11, 2009 | |
| Calen |
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Nov 2, 2008 | -8 for grammar +3 for the hunger/thirst/etc. bar +1 for interesting idea -1 for the fact that you can't befriend the dog D: -3 for short rooms without much plot Final rating: 2 Get better grammar and try again, and that'd boost your rating a bit. More plot and more development as well. |