Necromancer

Written by EndMaster / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Indicus	Aug 1, 2022	Nice story and nice that you can do more then just a world domination route by Indicus on Aug 1, 2022
Zero118	Feb 18, 2021	by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride	Feb 18, 2021	by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal	Jan 27, 2021	by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
CenturonRen	Jan 6, 2021	I've never been so conflicted over a story in my entire life. That said I love the story for it is a little short its one of the best i have ever read. I remembered doing this back in highschool, and i never completed it so i came back today to finish what i started back then. And honestly i would love to see Necromancer 2 like it's interesting to imagine what would happen in his travels after what happened. As much as i like the god of death end i love the end where your character and his wife just leave that life behind. I look forward to reading more of your stories and you now have another dedicated fan! by CenturonRen on Jan 6, 2021
antscoff	Dec 9, 2020	Played through to the "true" ending, and after the epilogue, I wanted more yet. The little political game of conquering the world was fun and highly variable. I made 3 mistakes along the way, some of which seemed unpredictable. The story arc lasted over an hour and that's without doing much reading of all the dead branches [pun intended] on the side. This is definitely a recommendable and fun adventure. by antscoff on Dec 9, 2020
Starbourne	Nov 27, 2020	by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin	Nov 22, 2020	by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
Dontannoyme	Oct 8, 2020	It's a really good book and the first EndMaster book I have read really good by Dontannoyme on Oct 8, 2020
InfinityOmega	Sep 20, 2020	by InfinityOmega on Sep 20, 2020
Ineffable	Aug 14, 2020	by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Novena	May 30, 2020	It's an interesting, well-written story with satisfying endings. I had fun reading it. Made me question my own morals, so an obvious 10/10. by Novena on May 30, 2020
Triclops	Jan 15, 2020	by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Triclops	Jan 15, 2020	Necromancer is a fantastic voyage in the region of power-tripping. I love it! by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky	Jan 14, 2020	This was the first EndMaster story I read, and it kept me up until the early morning hours. by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020
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TurnipBandit	Nov 22, 2019	by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302	Nov 21, 2019	by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6	Nov 21, 2019	by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef	Nov 21, 2019	by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
DerPrussen	Nov 21, 2019	Read this one then Death's Song, then give Eternal a go. There are Easter eggs galore. Well, there's at least on Easter Egg and a shared world. by DerPrussen on Nov 21, 2019
venyanwarrior	Nov 19, 2019	by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
mizal	Nov 19, 2019	If you haven't read this one and Eternal, wtf are you even doing with your life? by mizal on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka	Nov 19, 2019	by ninjapitka on Nov 19, 2019
Cricket	Aug 27, 2019	by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
number0	Jun 15, 2019	Very, very, great. Probably the best story from infinite story!!! by number0 on Jun 15, 2019
angelis0236	Dec 13, 2017	This might just be the best thing I've ever read. Thank you for bringing this piece of artwork into the world. by angelis0236 on Dec 13, 2017
Laevi	Jul 26, 2015	by Laevi on Jul 26, 2015
jackhammer40k	Feb 23, 2015	I love the necromancer. It is just so cool and i enjoyed it. by jackhammer40k on Feb 23, 2015
Ashton	Sep 17, 2013	Really enjoyed this. Endmaster has a knack for leading you where you want to go -- and throwing in some twists you didn't know you wanted. And I think this is my favorite of his. Very satisfying to read. While it didn't seem to have the same variance of choices that "Ground Zero" had, the overall storyline made you feel that the decisions you made were more "world-wide." This story makes you feel powerful. I also really enjoyed "Eternal" but I felt that the endings weren't as dramatic as the ones here in Necromancer. Best of the Best of the Best imho. by Ashton on Sep 17, 2013
Thickskullman	Aug 30, 2013	Brilliant. Even better than EndMaster's usual standard. by Thickskullman on Aug 30, 2013
MasterofAll	Jun 25, 2013	The story line is great, but the grammer could use a fix. MasterofAll by MasterofAll on Jun 25, 2013
Salamislim	Nov 28, 2012	Okay, so, I read this way back in the day. I loved it. I even commented on it once already. But, dude. This world, story, writing... sigh EndMaster, you are an amazing writer. Seriously. I've been working on a novel for a year or so now, and I keep thinking about this story. The detail, the dialogue, fucking everything. If I ever get my thing published, would it be alright to list you as one of the inspirations for it? Because you fucking are. Granted, I'm not stealing anything from you, but it IS a fantasy novel, so it has, you know... fantasy shit in it. Anyway, thank you for inspiring me to write in the first place. I'm going back to reading your story now. Again. Because it's amazing. by Salamislim on Nov 28, 2012
EndMaster	Sep 28, 2012	Heh. Well that is certainly one way of looking at it. by EndMaster on Sep 28, 2012
Marksdarkness	Sep 22, 2012	Well I don't think he was a villain more like a victim of nature we all know we can't defy our true nature no matter how hard we try welp that's my shitty philosophical input. by Marksdarkness on Sep 22, 2012
FilipinoWalrus	Oct 30, 2011	by FilipinoWalrus on Oct 30, 2011
Serede	Jan 15, 2011	Should be a motion picture!! by Serede on Jan 15, 2011
EndMaster	Jan 3, 2011	Milianotus is a fucktard who obviously didn't get it. The protagonist is a fucking villian (Should've been pretty obvious with the title and first few pages) and doing evil things are going to be the choices. If you didn't want to be a "sick conqueror" (Lol at your sensitivity) you shouldn't have been reading it in the first place. by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
pedromundo	Dec 22, 2010	by pedromundo on Dec 22, 2010
infernalbovine	Nov 25, 2010	EPIC! by infernalbovine on Nov 25, 2010
Zac6251	Aug 17, 2010	by Zac6251 on Aug 17, 2010
silentninja	May 3, 2010	Another great story from you by silentninja on May 3, 2010
bsal	Feb 2, 2010	Excellent story. Congratulations to the author. by bsal on Feb 2, 2010
Lrdwhyt	Jan 18, 2010	Amazing story. by Lrdwhyt on Jan 18, 2010
ShadowLycan	Jan 18, 2010	by ShadowLycan on Jan 18, 2010
nodnarB	Nov 8, 2009	Great story by nodnarB on Nov 8, 2009
Milianotus	Oct 22, 2009	I loved the beginning, I loved the main character, I loved the idea... but what the fuck?! I didn't want to be any kind of sick conquer of the city! More choices, please, just like there was in the Legend. Very good story, but not a good infinite-story, that's why it's only 6! by Milianotus on Oct 22, 2009
Kylo24	Jul 29, 2009	i would love to see a spin of with the other types of magic to choice from by Kylo24 on Jul 29, 2009
Bigbadmonkey	Jan 25, 2009	kick ass man by Bigbadmonkey on Jan 25, 2009
Everlosst	Jan 4, 2009	by Everlosst on Jan 4, 2009
mechano1	Dec 2, 2008	really enjoyed it. i liked the way you blended in the modern mix with fantasy (as if mages and necromancers swore like us lol) by mechano1 on Dec 2, 2008
PaperWario	Sep 29, 2008	I spent so much time on this. One of the best stories (interactive or not), that I've had the pleasure of reading on the internet. Thanks by PaperWario on Sep 29, 2008
Kyylick	Sep 26, 2008	by Kyylick on Sep 26, 2008
Zarok	Aug 11, 2008	by Zarok on Aug 11, 2008
Deathknight13	Jul 8, 2008	Excellent, even though i'm new, and this is the second story at this site i've read, (the first being ground zero) I think this is a very good read. Excellent work at interconnecting the branches together, I had alot of fun reading this one, very well thought out and very detailed by Deathknight13 on Jul 8, 2008
Genesis	Mar 16, 2008	by Genesis on Mar 16, 2008
KatieWroteIt	Jan 8, 2008	This is the greatest love story ever written! I love a little gore with my romance. By far my favorite story on the site... possibly my favorite story ever written. by KatieWroteIt on Jan 8, 2008
Thiefswipe	Jan 4, 2008	by Thiefswipe on Jan 4, 2008
Tulips	Dec 6, 2007	one of the best stories ive read by Tulips on Dec 6, 2007
vegabond213	Oct 31, 2007	by vegabond213 on Oct 31, 2007
Bryton779	Oct 29, 2007	very good, i can't stop reading by Bryton779 on Oct 29, 2007
SandDemon	Oct 22, 2007	3 words...BEST STORY EVER!!!! by SandDemon on Oct 22, 2007
michaelrayholt	Oct 7, 2007	Well, now that I've done this, End is sure to reset the ratings for sure... right? :) Perhaps you've never put this much THOUGHT into a story before, perhaps you've never hit on a genre agreeable to me, perhaps I'm waking up from a long nap... I don't know. This was a very enjoyable read. Even with my eye for detail, I don't remember any out-and-out errors (although you may want to change "Narrow minded focus on killing someone" on the first page to "Narrow mindedly focusing...") that were so grievous as to destroy my concentration. I particularly enjoyed the fact that some pictures had captions, much like there would be in an ACTUAL book. Have you considered having this published, by the way? Excellent work. I only wish I could focus on any ONE story long enough to do the same. by michaelrayholt on Oct 7, 2007
neon725	Sep 14, 2007	by neon725 on Sep 14, 2007
Salamislim	Aug 20, 2007	This story is fucking awesome. One of the best I've ever read. by Salamislim on Aug 20, 2007
Salamislim	Aug 20, 2007	This story is amazing. by Salamislim on Aug 20, 2007
Goren	Aug 7, 2007	That was amazing. Best story I've seen yet. by Goren on Aug 7, 2007
scottmah	Aug 3, 2007	This story is fucking amazing. Thank you for that! by scottmah on Aug 3, 2007
Futurecast	Jun 13, 2007	Utterly Superb. I read every room with great enjoyment. by Futurecast on Jun 13, 2007
liamheregonnaread	Jun 5, 2007	true this is za best by liamheregonnaread on Jun 5, 2007
liamheregonnaread	Jun 5, 2007	THIS IS THA FREAKIN BEST STORY EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by liamheregonnaread on Jun 5, 2007
Plastic	Jun 3, 2007	by Plastic on Jun 3, 2007
Jargner	May 20, 2007	by Jargner on May 20, 2007
apotheosis	May 17, 2007	I think this story wins for ratings... by apotheosis on May 17, 2007
BurntFlower	May 16, 2007	Brilliant. I think this has to be your best story yet. by BurntFlower on May 16, 2007
Vesnicie	Apr 29, 2007	This is one of those situations where I wish I could give a half-point rating. I would like to give it a 9.5, taking off for some grammar mistakes. I also felt that the story meandered a little bit; it could have been a little tighter in terms of plot. I was happy to see big rooms with lots of action in them, but I would have appreciated even a bit more sensory description. On the plus side, there are some very funny parts of this story and some vivid characters. Also, the plot is interesting and I'm always a fan of the anti-hero. I have decided to base this and future ratings on a relative scale for this site, so I give you a ten based on the fact that this is one of the five best stories I have read here. And thanks for the heads-up on the carpet-munching witches. That means I need to not invite certain friends over for sleepovers anymore. by Vesnicie on Apr 29, 2007
Victoria7	Apr 15, 2007	by Victoria7 on Apr 15, 2007
Qflingspoo	Apr 7, 2007	My second favorite story on this site. by Qflingspoo on Apr 7, 2007
Usoki	Mar 22, 2007	The sheer number of perfect ratings is astonishing. Part of me wants to ruin that just for the hell of it, but I'd have to be a total ass and pick a freakishly low number just to make a dent. "Surely," I thought, "I could at least find enough flaws to give it a nine." And then I noticed that the story's outcome determined the moment you side between Big Red or the professor, and I was impressed. It flows very well, and doesn't ever seem to stall. It's a bit dialogue heavy in parts...but I get impatient after awhile...and, really, who am I to bicker about excessive verbose-ness? The dialogue and descriptions were either necessary for the visual imagery, or important to the plot or humor. It's long, but I can't really think of anything I could label as 'filler'. The only thing I could possibly whine about is the freakish amount of power that the main characters have, that no one else does. Surely, someone out there would have been just as adept as at nature magic as the protagonist is at necromancy? Surely, the demons couldn't've taken over kingdoms that quickly? Surely, good could've put up more of a fight than just the sister? It all seems excessive. None of the lesser characters are nearly as powerful as the main ones. It's a ridiculous variation of God-modding. But, really, who cares? by Usoki on Mar 22, 2007
EvilZombi	Mar 21, 2007	Probably the best solo-author story on this site. by EvilZombi on Mar 21, 2007
tandaman	Mar 14, 2007	I SWEAR TO GOD THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! So many choices...and so many good endings! I liked every one of them. Keep up the good work! by tandaman on Mar 14, 2007
Calen	Mar 12, 2007	Alright, alright, you've probably got to feel pretty good having so many perfect 10s, but man oh man you deserve them. Awesome story. by Calen on Mar 12, 2007
dnukem	Mar 6, 2007	Very Excellent story. I went back and chose different directions and each different choice led to a completely different place. I do not know how this story could be improved upon. by dnukem on Mar 6, 2007
donteatpoop	Mar 4, 2007	Another excellent job EndMaster. This isn't my favorite of your works, but there is so much more detail and story in this than any of your other stories. Excellent plotlines, your character development was great and you actually managed to provide the reader with a series of interesting side characters. by donteatpoop on Mar 4, 2007
Drewc91	Feb 27, 2007	Yes! So glad to see another EndMaster story and a fantasy one no less! by Drewc91 on Feb 27, 2007
glowworm	Feb 19, 2007	This is incredible,the fact that such a great story could be completed in only 2 days. I love the idea controling the "bad" guy for once. Lots of fun and humor too. and the violence-gotta love the violence. by glowworm on Feb 19, 2007
xnull	Feb 18, 2007	This story kept me enthralled. Endmaster created a world similar to others I have seen before, but led me through it in a completely different way. He kept all the details straight throughout the story, and only minor blemishes in the writing quality were encountered. Truly something to be envious of. by xnull on Feb 18, 2007
apotheosis	Feb 18, 2007	by apotheosis on Feb 18, 2007

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