NM

Written by piano / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
PickleKing	Jan 31, 2019	?!? by PickleKing on Jan 31, 2019
Artazansss	Sep 25, 2011	by Artazansss on Sep 25, 2011
Zac6251	Apr 5, 2010	by Zac6251 on Apr 5, 2010
magic	Jul 24, 2009	This is filled with trash so all the rooms are gone. Nice one, making it deleted, good choice. I hate it. I would've rated it higher if the story wasn't deleted. by magic on Jul 24, 2009
razman	Jun 5, 2007	Where the hell is the rest of the story. It is probably better off staying like though if it is like that for the rest of it. I'm not going to bother typing anything else. by razman on Jun 5, 2007
EndMaster	Feb 2, 2007	Well I suppose the fact that the story ends on the first page is a plus, since it prevents us from being subjected to anymore of it. by EndMaster on Feb 2, 2007
Dan2	Sep 18, 2006	uhh, are you a bich? by Dan2 on Sep 18, 2006
apotheosis	Aug 9, 2006	Get raped. by apotheosis on Aug 9, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jun 18, 2006	Die. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jun 18, 2006
jeffisthebest	Jun 18, 2006	I hate the old, cliched, "going to school and doing nothing stories." They must outnumber the Inu Yasha ones! Crazy. Very poor story. by jeffisthebest on Jun 18, 2006
donteatpoop	Jun 17, 2006	Your expectations were correct. I found this story meaningless and rife with errors... Oh wait... Sorry... Let's try that again. Man, u wuz rite, dis story sukt balz. by donteatpoop on Jun 17, 2006
piano	Jun 17, 2006	I don't expect you to like it! by piano on Jun 17, 2006