Flow Vs Diva!!!

Written by Joebwoy / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Lackofmop	Oct 13, 2013	by Lackofmop on Oct 13, 2013
Calen	Mar 13, 2007	All my writers instincts say that this story sucks- not great grammar all the time, plotline isn't driven, too short- but I liked the feel to it. Work a bit harder and I think you can make some good work. by Calen on Mar 13, 2007
apotheosis	Dec 11, 2006	This wasn't very good... by apotheosis on Dec 11, 2006
jeffisthebest	Dec 26, 2005	WTH is this??? by jeffisthebest on Dec 26, 2005
YazZMaN	Dec 26, 2005	...It had a really cool picture of the choppy head guy... by YazZMaN on Dec 26, 2005
JohnJohnson	Dec 26, 2005	I don't even know what to say. by JohnJohnson on Dec 26, 2005
Joebwoy	Dec 26, 2005	great heh by Joebwoy on Dec 26, 2005
donteatpoop	Dec 26, 2005	It's been a while since you've been on here writing. You haven't really worked on your writing much, have you? It's good that you are writing, but you really need to look into a few things: quotation marks, reasonable spelling, and more description. You're funny. You have great ideas and fun plotlines, but you don't spend enough time on them forming them into decent stories. I can tell that you can do better just looking at your stories, just put a little more effort into them. by donteatpoop on Dec 26, 2005