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The Great Adventure of Aaron Appelapolous

Written by Nalan / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 7.00 (4 ratings) (4)
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Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Sep 16, 2013
by Lackofmop on Sep 16, 2013
Thickskullman
Thickskullman		 May 18, 2013
by Thickskullman on May 18, 2013
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 6, 2007
I think DEP really nailed it. The story is put together well, but a lot of the sections meant to be funny ended up simply being annoying. Occasionally the comedy worked, but more often than not it didn't. Still, it is a solid piece of work and I'm going to reinforce its 8 rating.
by apotheosis on Jun 6, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jun 2, 2007
As with everything you've written, it is well done. I found the humorous edge to the story to be more annoying than entertaining, however.
by donteatpoop on Jun 2, 2007

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