Comments & Ratings
|THE BEST STORY YET!!!|
|Yeah I'm not a horror fan, so I guess that's why this isn't a favorite of mine.|
|This was so funny and original.|
I'm rating this a 9 only because I spotted a few grammatical and spelling errors. Also, Dracula seemed to have been losing his accent periodically.|
Great job, DEP! I like your work.
|Haha, you crazy-ass donteatpoop. Once again other good and long story with that mixed in sense of humor.|
|A very entertaining and original story line. I really enjoyed the humor and style. You would have been given a "10" rating but you made one unacceptable spelling error...its Newcastle Brown Ale, not New Castle. I should know, my husband's a Geordie from Newcastle, where we live ;)|
|My dishonest personality told me to rate my own story a ten. Cheating rules!!!|
Hilarious! I never thought I'd say this, but you've really improved, DEP! Not just with the spelling and grammar (and by the way, it's "passers-by" instead of "passer-byes"), but you've improved totally - comprehensively. I wish we had .5's, because I seriously want to give this a 9.5 (as I was thinking 9.4), but I guess I'll have to round down, darn it.|
Keep up the good work! I got the 50-foot-woman killing the Village of the Damned kids ending. Priceless.
|Very funny!!! What else can I say? Don't be too hard on yourself, this story was a good read.|