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DetectiveAlfred
DetectiveAlfred
Sep 12, 2014
by DetectiveAlfred on Sep 12, 2014
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
Jun 2, 2011
I agree with umm..ChubbyTeletubby and Usoki, let's just say I'll give you a 2. I liked the beginning, which is, yeah, what Usoki said, it is in fact 1:29 in the morning as you claimed! How strange..that's why I'm gonna give you a 3.
by TheCandyMan on Jun 2, 2011
Infinate
Infinate
Apr 28, 2010
by Infinate on Apr 28, 2010
Crimmy
Crimmy
Aug 11, 2009
by Crimmy on Aug 11, 2009
Alejate
Alejate
Jun 18, 2008
You're right, I shouldn't be reading this. Buh-bye.
by Alejate on Jun 18, 2008
Ghizzard
Ghizzard
May 30, 2008
It's not late ATM tho....
by Ghizzard on May 30, 2008
KaticaLocke
KaticaLocke
Feb 26, 2008
by KaticaLocke on Feb 26, 2008
Armando322
Armando322
Jul 14, 2007
Not bad...
by Armando322 on Jul 14, 2007
Vesnicie
Vesnicie
May 19, 2007
Why bother making a story like this? You call it "1 in the morning humor", I don't call it humor at all. If you're suffering from flatulence of the brain, get an etch-a-sketch and make crazy little designs or take a long bath with your head submerged, but please don't write a story.
by Vesnicie on May 19, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
Nov 16, 2006
Not good. End of story. No further description required.
by apotheosis on Nov 16, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Oct 13, 2006
Shouldnt need to be explained.
by jeffisthebest on Oct 13, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
Jul 16, 2006
Bitch you give CRACK ATTACK a 1!!!!

That's what we call, "fuckin' up", Bitch nigga faggot ass aid sucking semen swapper.
You didn't even bother to leave a comment.

Bitch die.

Bitch die slow.

Bicth die like a two-bit, mo' fuckin ho'...
Who spit prematurely, came up short with the dough.
Came up short and got *POP! POP*, with a .44!

Bitch die like Hezbollah!

Like Al'Qaeda!

Like them Iraqi "freedom Fighters"!

Die like Darth Vader!

Like everyone else!

Except so much sooner.

Die like your mom, bitch.

Her shit's like rotten tuna.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 16, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jul 13, 2006
I've read more involved stories in bowls of alphabet soup.
by donteatpoop on Jul 13, 2006
Usoki
Usoki
Jul 11, 2006
The 'Author's Notes' at the beginning were amusing, and fairly clever. However, I soon realized that they weren't a hint at the greatness to come: They were the only part of the work that could even remotely be called funny.

Here I am, awake at One o'clock in the morning as suggested in the story. It's not funny. There's not enough material here to be funny. You have a nice, random sense of humor, I think. I'm not sure, but a few one-choice room strings gave me hints that you do have that sort of humor. If you would expand each room beyond one or two sentences, this would be a lot better.
by Usoki on Jul 11, 2006

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