Comments & Ratings
Quality is highly varied.|
Mostly not so good.
|That was so... dumb. The first choices were pointless (why bother letting us choose Pokemon when the only one we can actually choose is Squirtle... well, I dunno, I haven't tried Pikachu... but still, wtf, you get my point). When there are choices, make sure the reader DOES have a choice, or you miss the point.|
|GOD DANM! THIS SUCKS! OK KID, YOUR NOT FUNNY! GET THAT THROUGH YOUR FUCKEN LITTLE MIND! FUCK YOU!|
|This story isnt really that good, it could be better. It has weird choices|
|I wish I could give this a negative rating. Pokemon is the ultimate in mind-numbing garbage and I can't say much for the people who create or contribute to this sort of crap.|
Man, I was just fucking round when I made the funny pages. (I thought Undertakerjoe would delete them)|
Is it because of me you all helped to rape this story of it's inocence?
|This was funny!|
|so bad its good!|
|Check my rooms, they rule!|
|Can I be the stupid Pokemon? Oh... I guess you've already given us that option.|
|The Pokemon craze is something I like to pretend never happened. Kinda like how some people say there was no holocaust.|
|pretty good, much better than the other pokemon adventure|
|It would ROCK if you would finish it yourself w/o all these @$#&ing "write it yourself" things popping up CONSTANTLY.|