How Many Men Would Survive?

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
bardoor44444		Jan 20, 2021	This is the best story I’ve read so far on this website. So captivating!! I loved every part of it. The author is so talented. by bardoor44444 on Jan 20, 2021
mizal		Apr 25, 2016	The first page: ************* You wake up to your king calling out to you "Dan rally up your men we are going to be attacked soon" "Ok" *********** Er...gripping drama and adventure this is not. And it just goes on like this. I'm sure the author has a very cool, epic story going on in their head, but they're not bothering to communicate it at all. Slow down a little, add some detail and for the love of God do some proofreading. by mizal on Apr 25, 2016