A dead body in a bed, AND you're hung over!

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I like the premise and the general plot, but the writing quality and grammar was atrocious. It switches between saying "you" and "I" as if they are one in the same and jumps tenses just about every sentence. It was bad enough to hamper readability.
by apotheosis on Jun 16, 2007
It's a good concept for a story. I've always liked the memory loss stories so I gave it a 9 to hopefully inspire to go further with the storyline. I'm looking foward to reading more. I'll even try and throw in a couple of rooms.
by NCPolice55571 on Aug 3, 2004

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